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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.
lol oh sorry lol i edited it didnt mean to say what i did.
Ooohhhh..no worries..just wondering..lol
I spaced the letters out so I could draw them better and I guess more evenly too but thanks for the crit.
haha yea no problem.
id really like to see it closer together with a certain flow!
some simple sssstufff...................
Everyone might be crying cuz that can't read this but i think this wildstyle piece is dope as hell, i love most of the letters except your K needs to be separated from your E and your F needs more clarity. Bad ass letters and form, can't wait for the fill on it.
super duper type freshness.
its gettin there but i reckon the letters just aint flowin looks a bit too wibbly wobbly for my liking.. u got the 3d sorted now work on more simple peices, with more defined bends
LOVE the fills. love the letters.
Widen your Z next time to flow it better. like maybe have the end of it stick out like your M.
yeah im feelin that piece/and or fill
thanks for the crits everybody. i think i might do that piece on a canvas, so i'll post that whenever i get around to painting it. baze, i'm feeling everything but the A. it just looks a little too slanted, know what i mean? i realllly dig the way the B and E flow also.
baze: those simps are soooo hot that would be a really nice piece beside some tracks. i think the B could be a little bigger but not much
Moze2: Best piece you've produced yet. really good fill (not feeling the things in the E as much like maybe have it more like the O with dots. and the Z looks a little funky but over all those letters flow the most out of everything you've done and the 3d is lookin gooood.
good job man
Knucks: sure hit me up:
Amaze: lookin good but i think on the 2nd one the K is getting really close to being an R the brown one is a little more seperated at the top. and yea id be down for an exchange.
All the people who keep posting stuff and asking for crits before critting, stop! no ones gonna crit anything if you dont first and then you'll just be bumping trash up so from now on leave crits before you get them.
baze-i likes its...FRESH!
another bleh throw
was helping jroc with his r earlier not really a sketch but i figured i'd post it....word.
CAKE - I'm not really feelin the K. Extend the upper part, so there isn't that open space.
Forgot to post this one earlier.
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needs some 3d i thinks
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i drew block letters all day in school today.
i drew up some block letters here and jjust decided to trick em out a lil bit with 3d, i call it "6 random extensions that have no purpose in the sketch and they are just in there to take up space"(i tried not to bite rosy to hard this time)
ps. this took only like 45 mins i think
it's nicely done, but the only letter than looks like it has any real structure is the S.
i did this in like 5 minutes, do you think this Z looks a little better than the one in the sketch i posted earlier?
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and yes, those are some grapes with arms and legs.
hahaha yeah man its lookin real good!
Mosez - Diggin it. Looks better.
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