To be perfectly honest, and this is probably because I've only been at this graff thing for a week, but I can't make out the "Caiser" at all. I can kind of see the A, but that's about it. That said, looking at it strictly as art, I love it. It's very abstract, and both your drawing and colouring are clean and carefully done. That's probably not a lot of help, but at least your stuff doesn't really look like anyone else's that I've seen yet, and that's cool.
As with Atlok, I can't tell what it says, but strictly as art, I think it's cool. It's different, and that's never a bad thing.
nice name. nice simple. Mar...good to see you branchine out a lil but those top extensions are iffy...they look wierd..like i cant exlain why....they just look like youv plonked them on the top of each letter hoping thye look decent...the first extension on the M is nice..but again...there isnt any flow..cos that extension doesnt appear anywhere else to balance it out feel me ?.. View attachment 354184 like on this peice ^..can you see where i put the extension on the W..i repeated it on the T to balance it out...make it flow. just take a lil more time on your placing of extensions and most of all type of extension...cos it jus looks like you tried too hard man. again colouring is nice.
I love the cartoons. Good job on that. I know you've already commented on this, but I'm not feeling the two thin O's. It makes the rest of the piece look inconsistent.
THIS IS OK BUT I SUGGEST THAT U TRY TO MAKE THE LETTERS A LITTLE BIT FATTER UNLESS UR TRYING FOR THAT LOS ANGELES LOOK AND THE EXTENSION ONTOP OF THE A SHOULD HAVE A SHADOW TOO
I like it, especially the detail on the letters, like they're cracking or something. Very cool. I like the balance of it as well.
*Emak- both look nice, the first one especially. just the 3d on the second one is a bit off in places *Shook- don't try to do extensions or anything just yet, start simple. *Brunorod- looks good but I personally don't like the extension off the bottom right leg of the K. and your A doesn't flow with the rest. *Atok- Shits tight. *Techanuk- really nice simple. shows how something can look even more ill without extensions. *AMK- Shits tight, I'm just not feelin' the W, all your other letters are kinda smaller and thicker and your W is skinny and "out there". Edit: maybe it's actually the size of your H? ne ways looks good.
[Broken External Image]:http://img369.imageshack.us/img369/9506/caiserpinkorangebluede6iu3.jpg\ if this helps ne
not a sketch but fucket the toy digital thread is dead so i post here feedback on that one here please [Broken External Image]:http://i224.photobucket.com/albums/dd224/rsakens/2005_01_13giantjesus.jpg?t=1205865121
yeah im gonna start goin back to simples and work each letter out. i need a more consistant structure. but atleast it isnt like the the other crew members piece i asked him for a lilttle battle or whatever. and this was his \/\/ long story short, i got more votes. and thanks to all the crits
Atlok, it helps, but without that guide I'd still be totally lost. But like I said, it looks cool either way.
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View attachment 354321 cut off by scanner and it made the colour all wacked out. and word @ my marker dying