my bad for double posting. capo, the reason everyones tellin you to keep them all the same width is because its easier to learn when you keep them all the same width. and im pretty sure that in "advanced graffiti" the bars and lines that arnt the same width are extensions rather than the actual letters (at least for the most part)
[Broken External Image]:http://img209.imageshack.us/img209/8593/image0124nk4.jpg Zofism for Zof teh Horse. Because I'm bored. Lulz. The Z is wayy to skinny. =[ EDIT: Chump. I'll hook you up with a simple only if I get the vibe that you're a cool kitty cat. And If I feel kinda sexually attracted to you. That goes to all.
Your plan to post it in three threads worked. I didn't post, then didn't post, and now Im posting because its everywhere I go. The scribbles in the hair look kinda messy, make them more the same size loops for a better scribble fill. Guys got one thick neck on him, but it fits. The simples are gritty in a good way though the structure could be better. Don't like the heart. Constructive stuff outta the way, I like it.
thanks man.. yea the heart was just a random thing.. lol and the simples on the side were just doodles..
I like it a lot, the letters are good. Nice and clean too. Rhyse, I like how you've tried to go with a comical/illustrated approach, but just fix up some anatomy things, like the neck, far too think. Otherwise it's sweet.
for the girl<3 the outline of the letters were freeform... what ive been working on and the fill is some sloppy ass shit [Broken External Image]:http://img340.imageshack.us/img340/9063/32708marciewn5.jpg
for the girl<3 the outline of the letters was free-formed... what ive been working on, and the fill is some sloppy ass shit [Broken External Image]:http://img340.imageshack.us/img340/9063/32708marciewn5.jpg
[Broken External Image]:http://img187.imageshack.us/img187/5279/mar27126id1.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://img182.imageshack.us/img182/1323/mar27127tc2.jpg some shit i did during mathematics 2nd one is completely experimental
I don't like the extension on the leg of the R but it looks kind of good on the K. Take away the bar on the bottom in the N
your vanishing points are pretty good, and letter structure too...I like it all except that retarded E in the first one :]