i give crits to others to they can improve. maybe if you little cockfags would learn to give crits back then i could do that. but its cool, where do you think i should take my own advice?
akel and wake - both sick stuff, no crits just colored this [Broken External Image]:http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v489/Ruddell/DSCN0406.jpg
tare: work on your R's a bit more, try diff stuff with the top loop of the R. ill pm you with sketches of R's of what i mean later on today. other then that your improving alot
headsick- simples I need help finishing this [Broken External Image]:http://img410.imageshack.us/img410/1957/dscn0412pi4.jpg
bump 4 sum crits i know the boxes r fuct n i dun like my r cyto - make ur a taller, make ur t n first stick on r skinnyer n make the e consistant in thickness n maybe lose the curl at the bottom cash - same 4 u make the thickness of ur letters consistant desypher - maybe lose ur extensions on the 3d
rave thats a lot better than your other stuff, at least i can read it. an to be honest, i like the boxes, i think its a fresh idea. i just dont think it looks good with the steeze of your letters. keep the idea for when you progress more. thicken up your bars and bring your letters closer together tare, make your A bigger, i dont like how its smaller than the rest. its lookin good bro i know its wack, but i think it could have potential if worked with. any crits before i had the shadow to it?? [Broken External Image]:http://img186.imageshack.us/img186/9040/tamk11lt5.jpg
lol i think the top box came out nice but the bottom one is gay jet take out the top 2 extensions on ur t n maybe the 2 at the bottom right of ur m lookin letter n what does it say tamk or tamc or w/e??
just messing around with colors, really. kinda fucked up the Y. Rave, just work on letters before you add anything like the boxes.
ickis work on your letters before wasting color and straighten your hand up. [Broken External Image]:http://i108.photobucket.com/albums/n32/zinone/NARgraffiti1.jpg
jet pack i would stop connecting the letters 2gether... it makes it hard to read seek139 id drop the random huge extensions around the letters critics plz [Broken External Image]:http://img135.imageshack.us/img135/3238/pict0006tl6.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://img444.imageshack.us/img444/5369/pict0005kx5.jpg
yeah im working on the last two now, havin a bit of trouble with it, but its gettin there. any suggestions on what would look good with the M and the K at the end? erase, im diggin your steeze, that one were the letters head downwards is ill. your steeze has kinna an azn feel to it. nice color choices as well. the only thing im not entirely feelin your R. maybe try spacing out the kick and the loop of it just a bit cheers