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atlok -- something's just off about your piece, but i cant put my finger on it [Broken External Image]:http://img527.imageshack.us/img527/597/87021374mr8.png
awryt m8, armys gd, fills ma wallet lol.. just no time to do shit as u can probs tell by my shit... get a wee bump out o it for sum mo crtisizzles lol.. samp1e - im not too keen on it, but mite just be my personal peeves... never been a fan of thickness of lines being inconsitent in a a piece.. and also not a fan of tons of lines cuttin into the letters, a few is ok if thy placed appropriately. other than that its fairly plain. fools - dont do arrows that come straight out of a letter, thts fugly.. fair nuf if it was an addon or extension, but not at the end of a letter.. atlok - i like it mate. just not too sure about the N, looks too small n squashed up.. also if u huna do stars, get em right, if not they look guff.. jers - love it man, nothin i can say to giv u sum advice.. just keep on keepin on.. simples rock when done right, and u sir do em right.. NOW THATS HOW YA GIVE CRITS U CUNTS WHO DONT CONSIDER IT.. FUCKIN STOP JUST SAYIN 'CRITS'... peas
http://img172.imageshack.us/img172/7800/vermontdp3.jpg (http://imageshack.us) Posted this a while back, got nothin except a 3d.. i still havnt worked on it.. ibomb4kog: a little weird, work on the handsteezys a bit nemz: solid. no comment. atlok: yeah i agree, something is off somewhere.. it may be that your bars are different and inconsistent lengths samp: p is a little too curved, but it still looks fine. i dont know how this writing got italicized
I FOUND IT !!!!!!!!!!!!! its the connection between the i and the s. still fresh as fuck tho great job atlok
no worries man.. lil ish i done today.. tryin new shit. 3rd sketch in a year now remember.. on a seperate note... .D.H. - [Broken External Image]:http://img172.imageshack.us/img172/7800/vermontdp3.jpg theres ur pic posted proper, and i quite like it, simple with sum funk, get sum 3dizzle on it..
drak- nice coloorzz nemzone- i love that m man samp1e- nice syle lol.. uh cant rly crit u cuz i suck but yeah.. advise to help me get better? xD [Broken External Image]:http://img169.imageshack.us/img169/9585/0504081840wu8.th.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://img145.imageshack.us/img145/122/0504081839qd2.th.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://img201.imageshack.us/img201/1230/0504081838me2.th.jpg crits?
very nice Samp !!! nice for the 3rd in the year Nemz...bring back thta old ish tough View attachment 359535 first sketch in a few weeks..may paint.
nem- top ones tight as shit ibomb- that characters dope, maybe some color? jam- the venom is pretty good, but as far as the other two, use bars and possibly some three d once you have a good letter form down mass- sick bannana
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My first real letter, I know i'm a toy but i'm learning, I was told to stick with paper and pencil so here I am learning. Final Result [Broken External Image]:http://img187.imageshack.us/img187/3277/040508130500eb3.jpg