New stuff.. Crits please.. Forgiven-ok letters, but straighten them up more, and make the bars all the same width for now. rowdy-cool throws I like them, but work on your chars. iBomb-LOVE the char, kinda reminds me of mine, but like a space age version, nice. Calculating-pretty nice, but whats with the random blue bubbles? rsaken-The top one is SO dope and clean, but the bottom one is still awesome and steeze but your forgot some lines in the 3D bubbles thing...
shits to clean and just on another level to his paper work i agree. u aint foolin no one hommie, u aint gotta lie to kick it. that throw is not bad at all, its decent. your paper work however is horrid. i might also add, u did get caught biteing slob. dont go down this road, u will fail.
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gets-i'm feeling the 2nd pic down a lot, the throw. and the last one has potential, i'm feeling the whole bumpy letter thing, but maybe make more bumps but make them smaller, know what i mean? capo-fairly clean, but you should make the letters going in a straight line for now. also, maybe work on a simpler tag, there's no way you could get that one up like that in 10 seconds and still have it look good. just go a bit simpler. which one of these three are you guys digging the most? i'm going to paint one, but i can't decide which. (i'd normally paint them all, but i'm running low on paint.) View attachment 363745 View attachment 363746 View attachment 363747
I like the first the most. It's hot. Just make sure the top of the M is even with the tops of the other letters.
Bumping my shitzz Base:that name uis overused, and those arrows on the green one are terribly out of place. The whoel letter system is wackk. MOES:Good effort their put a pink forecefield or a bright neon color to relaly pop it up.
capo- what moes said moes- first ones got a nice top flow goin just make the m a little taller. vandal- go simpler for now dont worry about fills or extensions for a long time envar- bust out some simpler stuff lay low on those extensions for now [Broken External Image]:http://img90.imageshack.us/img90/4182/img0192qq6.jpg simples can be very fun after a few bong rips
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looks like kd to me, put a hole or dot on the r so its clear, maybe make the semi circle chunk out of the r a little straighter