Wow i just put some of those blob looking add ons like on your Note piece on one of my exchanges..without knowing you put them on that..they look a little different though :/ shiiittt. anyways..crits?
Bets all i can say is try and keep your letters at the same hight and size and im not really liking the splatter things idk why im just not
Like vandal said, ur 1st E is kinda nowhere from the other letter But i can't really talk because i'm not enough good to crit ppls
Esole, I can kinda dig it. You should make your 3D a lot longer and probably go in some direction other than directly left (boring). make it longer/deeper, because you don't want to have all those spots in your letters where you can see the white of the paper behind them. It leaves a lot of negetive space that's just icky to deal with. Also your letters are kind of out of position (compare where the bottom of your S is as opposed to the bottom of your E) if you made them all follow tha ttrend, it'd look much better, but make them at least straight across if not. Also your second e is the only letter that doesn't use any lapping, it looks like it's OCD or something and it's trying to not touch the other letters, so it's bent in a weird way that throws its flow off balance.
i write bets normalls, this was an exchange with esole, but yeah i get you with the E..im used to it being my second letter so yeah they are. I always draw a strait line and keep along it. the paper is bent so it looks weird (see top of pic) thanks yo the 3d goes up and to the left. it fits this style imo. if it was any bigger i think it would look tacky on this particular piece. I get what your saying with the last E not touching. ill pay more attention to that kinda stuff in the future
you need to start out with basic bars and thats it dont worry about your "style" because if you just do simples and you'll develop one
yeah and you had some OK letters but you need to loose all the extensions and just work on your letter structure
the best place to find this stuff out is in the new 2 graff thread heres a link to it http://www.bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/showthread.php?t=2185 just read the first two pages and follow the advice
looks dope life. nice use of bars. drawn out of boredom. i <3 writing played out names. ...the K gave me a good idea for a new R though. fuck dead prismas and over flowing decos. [Broken External Image]:http://img357.imageshack.us/img357/3622/rekonok9.jpg