View attachment 382719 collab peice View attachment 382720 quick pen sketch for kasr gore?- pretty dope, maybe lose some of the extensions, but not too bad zen- keep workin with the simps, just use bars and make letters gizurd- deff fresh fill, do u just write gi, if not id like to see a full peice from u. dope style rasek- im feelin the e in the top peice alot more than the bottom, but ur gettin ur letters down good man, keep it up unsuccessful- dont be tryin to act hard, its the internet fool. work on actually makin letters, if u wanna try wildstyle u gotta get simps on lock stake- letters are nice, you shoulda just done an a instead of the skull
unsuccessful, your stuff lacks structure from what i can make out, stop trying to be tough and either outline it and so everyone can see the structure or do something more simple. no one here is intimidated by you and the more angry you get over fair criticism the less people respect/like you. gizurd, that fill is really cool, i wish i had the patience for coloring stuff in. zen, its good that youre keeping it simple, the middle one is the best so far. zen was the first name i ever wrote semi-seriously and i found that adding an S at the end helped a lot with the overall flow. i didnt even bother coloring this in since i fucked up [Broken External Image]:http://img104.imageshack.us/img104/2448/0624082249ik5.jpg
it sort of looks like my key board jetpack!! [Broken External Image]:http://i276.photobucket.com/albums/kk31/hokeswun/P1010006.jpg This H is a little bit more readable to, do you take it back now?
no, i dont. because your name dosen't look like your keyboard at all. the FUCK is better than your actual piece. i dont even see an H.
the only thing halfway good to anything is that E thats not your keyboard GATES <------------------draw letter that look like that
[Broken External Image]:http://img396.imageshack.us/img396/1341/billboard2ol1.jpg i didnt feel like posting an old flick, but if it gets you to shut up..
[Broken External Image]:http://img133.imageshack.us/img133/9983/img0360fb0.jpg part of the cais liquid and bek collab
..... well anyways ill just throw some of these out there [Broken External Image]:http://img181.imageshack.us/img181/640/drweirdqi1.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://img181.imageshack.us/img181/2469/goldng4.jpg forget about that on the bottom left.... [Broken External Image]:http://img181.imageshack.us/img181/4572/pgna1.jpg
[Broken External Image]:http://img523.imageshack.us/img523/3118/browfq1.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://img154.imageshack.us/img154/2565/yett7.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://img523.imageshack.us/img523/356/jerseap0.jpg some shit i've been doin...
the shadow on the s of the kasr isn right, besides that its good. jerse, some of your extensions on the last one could have been done better.
i only really like the e but what do you think? i missed a bit of 3d on the e, it says test ill post crits later, i just wrote all the crits then acidentally pressed back edit: sey- i like the flow of your second one but try it without the bars inside the letters, also try making the head of the r smaller.the first one is good but the bit on the y kills it jers- fresh as always, if thats an e on the end of the last one try to make it more similar to the first one or vice versa giz- i love your style, my favourite is the blue one on the third page. is that first one supposed to be an action figure? cause the joints look like the hips of an action figure riot- does that say sck? make all the letters the same size and simplify it liquid- your letters are pretty bad, stay simple but your fill skills are good, dont fall back on that though
just some old work like 4 week old work View attachment 382818 View attachment 382819 View attachment 382820 View attachment 382821 an exchange i did 4 elite from the uk 2 weeks or 3 weeks old View attachment 382822 Jersoner nice work
JERS! whats good homie. Shits lookin pretty fine. THRICE - Thats from like 3 or 4 months ago, howd you even find that?