yo this shit is tight. im really glad you got rid of the points. try it without running the top of the S into itself. if you know what i mean
View attachment 389107 tryin new shit with some exchanges, anyone else down? crits on letters would be cool too ohsnap- fresh, letters are gettin better. work on the middle of the s, round it out or something tunka- bring the n down as far as the u ilikepie- dope as always, reelin feelin the e in the gore piece scream out- your letters are gettin on point, ill smooth- i dont like the i but the m and k are nice.
more work pens. i'd start bringin pencils if i thought i could draw half as well with em. just a phase i guess. [Broken External Image]:http://img517.imageshack.us/img517/1898/003xf5.jpg and elm you wrote something about someone writing your name for you on one of your pics, and i was bored at work, so here ya go. i've looked over your simps the last couple pages and its getting better, just keep writing it over and over again. [Broken External Image]:http://img209.imageshack.us/img209/441/001ow8.jpg seywhat - nice simps, the fill on the doap is silly, but the letters are pretty straight. on the emjb, the e and m are good, the j is too skinny, and the b is weird looking on the curves on the right. id say play with your b's a little bit more. blue steel, it looks ok, but all the letters look pulled inward for some reason. just weird looking when they get smaller toward the ends like that. maybe try without? pie- no need for crits man, your on point. that lurn me to tag piece is super ill. swolen - i like the style, but get cleaner markers!
you know what else u coud werk on, the round bit of the p seems a lil skinny and the negative space in the s looks funny (losing the lil bumb on the end will fix it)
word i wish i wasnt so tiered i would bust out one more. thanks for the critts guys im out hal cyon looking fresh
ohsnap - dope fill and simples blue steel - one the a fix the middle bar seywhat - not feelin the a, u should make it even w/other letters hal - like the 2nd one... [Broken External Image]:http://img214.imageshack.us/img214/5613/yegr5.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://img214.imageshack.us/img214/5674/blaz8.jpg new stuff...crits???
Not feelin' those J's or the first E Jers. Other than that, those are nice, you always got some solid stuff. And thanks for the comments guys, I'm waiting for the new page so I don't post it all on the bottom again.
jers - its all good- only thing you might want to do is fix the bottom of the 's' in the first one becasuse its the only like rounded letter in the whole thing...
There we go, prime posting time And I know you were told before, but change your name Geze. Even though it's not spelled the same, it sounds the same. Like if you were to spell your name Taky 183, you'd still catch shit about it.
Pie - not sure if i'm feelin the faces... y'know? just my 2 cents Hey-o! View attachment 389129 And a fill I saw Cecske do... It looked better when he did it haha View attachment 389130 second 'e' ...ehhhh... and I Changed my name okay?? It is now pronounced GZ like the rapper... Jeezey
[Broken External Image]:http://img214.imageshack.us/img214/117/jul18198io7.jpg geze the blue one is better, but the G looks like a C, keep it up though.
Geze, change your fucking name... Oi Swolen, I wish I was cool enough to make my shit symmetrical. Nice shit dagg.
are you serious? its not the same anymore its not pronounced the same its not spelt the same plus I dont even panit man I stick to paper