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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.

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  1. osnapizzel

    osnapizzel Banned

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    irek and i like pie own this page

    but seriously pie i wonna see some fresh shit from you
  2. Mr yarbles

    Mr yarbles Elite Member

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    Tried to thicken up bars and change around ome letters
    Help? :)

    irek the last letter looks more like a c than a k

    Use bars.
  3. Reason To-Shine

    Reason To-Shine Senior Member

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    connect the 'a' at the top- striaghted the 'e'- the 'k' just needs works... like connect the upper right bar to the lower right bar- and have the diagonal bar of the 'z' go down all the way, dont make it go vertical.
  4. Fube

    Fube Elite Member

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  5. KrSr

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    How is this? Am I doing the bars better now?

  6. crevette

    crevette Member

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    krsr - you might think simples mean a tiny bit of add ons here on there, but NO. Straight bars, no add ons, bars of consistent length is good. I don't like the keyboard too much though. I have kinda bubbly handwriting so I use that. It's kinda girly almost. Works though.

    aekz - same as above.

    irek - first two letters look good, e is a little too big. The e loop would look with 3 bars instead of two, that dip there looks odd. The c has that split top which looks bizarre as well. Oh wait that's a k. Ha. Make that a k. Like the colors.
  7. Keke

    Keke Senior Member

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    just messing around pretty much simple,
    trying to get some letters i'm good with
    ^ eek the 3d looked better before my bad ass scanner^^
    krsr- simple man, your trying to make it look to good to fast , its like skateboarding ollie first brudda
  8. crevette

    crevette Member

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    My turn


    I need to buy some sharpies. I only have blue.

    The u and the p should be more separated

    Criticize me while I eat Nutella.
  9. letsgobombin

    letsgobombin Senior Member

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    im going out to a chill spot to do something with a mate whos never painted before so i thought i'd do something simple but stylish so that he can learn while im helping him
    it says relacs
    saek- dont worry about filling yet, just do it in pencil. i can see your using bars but you need to keep experimenting more, also take the little lines that go into the letter out like on the end of the extensions
    fube- thats nice, the only bit i dont like is where the h goes really thin on the left leg
    jers- your last stuff was much better, but my favourtie out of the 2 is the bottom one
    swolen- i think balance is one of the most important things and you got some good balance, only thing is that you s is really plain compared to your other letters, not saying your other letters are wild but your s only seems to suit because of the fill
  10. TaskOne

    TaskOne Senior Member

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    View attachment 389264
    Crits appreciated :)

    Freka - Lookin wild bro, nice shading but I cant read all the letters.
    Letsgobombing - Fix that A, other then that nice simple.
    P-love - Bars :| its whack
  11. CakeWalk99

    CakeWalk99 Senior Member

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    Task- Great colors! I like it!

    P Love- I also really like the colors.

    The Jers drawings are insane. I love thoes!
  12. Hater-AiD~>

    Hater-AiD~> Elite Member

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    even those bars glad you started on the right track though
  13. GIzUrD

    GIzUrD Senior Member

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    TASK your outline got lost in your fill, maybe a way lighter or way darker color next time
  14. TaskOne

    TaskOne Senior Member

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    Thanks for the crits guys. Yea Ill probably do a black outline or something. ;)
  15. crevette

    crevette Member

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    Elm - Yes, good finally simple. Go from there and start to add some curves and experiment with different letter shapes. But stick with straight bars etc.

    task - pretty sick structure, and the colors are good but in some parts it gets confused with the letter outline and stuff.

    I GOT CLOUT Elite Member

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    Just a shitty quickie before work.


    Letsgobombin - I really like that. Solid simp. I think the A is fine, your S is just a lil too high though.
    TASK - What Gizurd said, plus im not feelin your S or K this time around.
  17. IlikePie

    IlikePie Elite Member

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    Quicky that I did at summer school.

    Crevette, outline the whole thing. My uncle used to do that, but it was with night stylish straight letters. Looked real nice the way he did it, your way, not so much.
    Cakewalk, honestly, I think it's a bit too simple, push yourself at least a little.
    Task, fill is a bit busy, not a big fan of the S, but it's lookin' good.
    Relacs, I like that a lot.
  18. Reason To-Shine

    Reason To-Shine Senior Member

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    That Relacs is nice

    cakewalk- that would look better with some shadows. the letters are solid- simple but solid.

    alright... First attempt

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    Second- which I believe is much better

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  19. Hater-AiD~>

    Hater-AiD~> Elite Member

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    its good youre doing simps..but fix that G
  20. freka

    freka Senior Member

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    hey anyone know where my post went?