mabe if u outlined the letters in another color the shadow would fit in more. and ya pics should be working now.
oh, i thought that was 3d and in that case your drop shadow is really off and i would recommend not putting silver lines in your drop shadow
oh dope, good to see australian stuff has made it that far. Doesnt get better than drapht... haha. sketches for talking... the R's on both these are fucking horrible, so i dont need to be told [Broken External Image]:http://img257.imageshack.us/img257/8850/aug27219cq2.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://img169.imageshack.us/img169/6623/aug27220en7.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://img169.imageshack.us/img169/6623/aug27220en7.97327c6664.jpg
i prefer hilltop hoods and bliss n eso to drapt. but ozzie hip hop is dope. listenin to "in the shadows" by vents an suffa MC. dope song [Broken External Image]:http://img247.imageshack.us/img247/6761/rasek53as7.jpg oh, crits. hint-the spade is wack, but ive never liked spades. so it could be a personal preference. some of bar widths vary in consistancy. for example, the right bar of the N is a different width than the bar of the T. irekn baby that shit is dope, i like the R in the first one. it's a lot better than the E in my opinion. that K is dope too. im not feelin your new steeze too much though to be honest. i dont like the R or E in the second, i think its the curvy bar things. pocs, there isnt too much to crit. pretty solid. hot or miss with some sketches. but thats what advancement is. try bending the bars in wierder angles, see how that'd look
thanks for the crits. i think your E is letting you down there^, turn the A upside down and i think that's a pretty decent E, personally. im listening to walk on by the hilltop hoods, dope song haha. edit: i just realised how much shit i fucked up in that second sketch haha... alot of the 3d is off, the bottom right leg of the I... eh, whatever.
irek-nice stuff keep it comin rasek- nice sketch the e could be better though. and your one liner isnt one line... new sketch tried to bend the bars a little. crits? [Broken External Image]:http://i305.photobucket.com/albums/nn233/skeetz2911/rakesimp4.jpg
lets see you make a straight letter joint anymore of a one liner. you should do a capital A and K, the middle letters looked dwarfed either way, it'll shave minutes off my simples when i bomb. yeah hint, ill start workin on it.
did it to see if i could make a straight letter one liner i dont rly like it but its one line and that was the point View attachment 401635
i love that ^^ it still looks amazing even though you can tell it didn;t take you long View attachment 401644
Rasek- Feelin the "A" Bro. Just still not use to that "E" Looks good. I can see your starting to add on to your steez you should paint that bro. Rake- Your On the right track with the bars. Good Stuff, just Use Str8 letters man. Irek- Yo The "R" in the Second one is weak to me, but the other letters are solid. In the First one that is a plain out good simp.
HINT-once again man raw peice i like the green out line.. Fonone-pretty str8 man u need some work on the letters and work on the color selection the top 1 is the best... DRAK-lol i like the colors bro RESPERATION-yo u need work on the letter man i dont like how u filled in but besides that its pretty str8