Im 15 going on 16 this up in coming year. And I dont think my stuffs dope if you read it says Ive heard people say it was. Now while some people who say my stuff is good suck total hard cock, but theres an occasional fiew who are good and say my stuffs good, but it could use some improvements some places. They never said I had to go simple they just said I need to improve on some things. I know all about letters and what not im not trying to agrue with you guys this much over it if I never thought I knew what I was talking about. And all about styles is creating one over the years, and that doesnt come right out of no where. If you get what I mean, agian no beef (For I hate fighting on internet sense you cant win). Ive also been told that if I keep doing what I do, and people tell me the small things I do wrong I will get better. Because if you have noticed, I have gotten better other the couple months ive been here. I can post up comparisons if you like ? And I take note on everything thats usually said to me, because if I dont then why bother posting my stuff up (you get what I mean?)
Don't worry, Mass Appeal is only 15 and he's like 4ft tall. Plus he likes to PMS alot. and what the fuck Mass, how the fuck is anyone supposed to read that shit when its florescent?
Woe - Your trying really, way too hard for that style. However the B on the first sketch has no ends, and all the other letter have ends? What?
yeah like i said with that bane sketch, i was just makin lines really..i didnt care..haha i just started with a B that i ended up not liking..but i just bullshitted more letters. and really? idk, i think that woe looks alright..but if you say so.. hahaha
I always thought he was older than that, and how do you know he's only 4ft tall? Im 5'10 . Edit A piece I just did, Im trying out a different I this time ! View attachment 429706
I still think you should fix the top bar of the K. it's so tiny. Maybe a little fatter? The rest is nice though
wings- that s looks pretty cool. the i looks good it just looks out of place. and the extension on the N that goes from the bottom of the left leg towards the right is a little awkward. resperation- the R and the P are slacking but the E and S hold it up, pretty techy art shit. and yeah thats a good thing. woe- generally like your stuff but i cant really critique it this time since the handstyles hepos influenced and you dont really like your own freestyle, but keep up your previous shit, its legit. crits are welcome and encouraged. yee.
^ thank you sir. what do you say about that style though..try and work with it..or drop it? and yours almost looks like it says yask.. make the top bar of the E a little longerr.. i like it though, dope dimensions
if youre talking about the Bane freestyle yeah its pretty cool, goes along with the rest of your style, i kind of wouldve liked to see the E do fades to match the B but it still turned out alright. if you develop that style more i can see it becoming something good, try it.
Still need crits on this one another one coming as soon as i can upload it edit: dont you just love slow connections?