That MALOER is dope, but the R doesn't fit. It's the only letter with an angle like that and the hole seems off. . Otherwise it's harsh

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Shit for talking

 

I agree with rots. Bring the left leg of the R over like the left legs of the M and A and I think itll come together better.
Rots - The R on the first is nasty. If theres anything I would change I would make the horizontal bar of the T on the first one the same width as the others. At least above the E. It just looks a lil off. And maybe the E is hidden a bit too much.

The obligatory bump.

 

Yeah. I hated my T. I didn't notice that until I was done with it. And I was trying Shov's E and connectors.

 

shit looks pretty clean dekae

 

Yeah shit looks nice dekae

 

crits please










doether is my graff name

 

I try to be as helpful to people as possible. My crits are serious, and helpful.


I think you should quit.

 

Lol
pwned!!!!!

 

totally...

 

dont quit. read the new to graff thread slow

do simples

 

I know i should be offended but I lol'd pretty hard.
I'm trying

 

i see potential in your style. just gotta clean it up a bit. fuck with the letters more. stretch them and bend them. dont even bother with extensions yet

just some advice you dont gotta follow it

 

from octoberish
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went simpler
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bump

 

wings-dont really like your last couple of pieces, but i really liked all the shit u posted without color maybe its just the color throwing me off
Zase-fucking nice, some of the cracks or what ever their called look kinda weird though
scamere-not really feeling any of it just a personal opinion though
tink-try making your letters strait not all crooked and drop arrows
blunt-nice throwie
dekae-fucking clean, i think your name is the shit too
rote-feelin it excpt for the top of the t and e on the first sketch

 

magic.....no i've saw it in your photobucket account.

 

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vera for an exchange
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neak93,me

 

exchange with daws/dahs/any other way you can possibly spell it,


opte - good your using bars, but theres too much extensions, the n doesnt really look like an N. take off the extensions it would probably look dope