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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.

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  1. Bink1

    Bink1 Elite Member

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    zase dope as always :D
    dahs nice n simple.
    gxc- i hate those vanishing point shadows but looks alright
    rozwel- looks nice except the L it should be a capital,do the shadows.
     
  2. dim

    dim Elite Member

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    you have a good handle down on things but in the sobe sketch the b covers too much of the e if ur gunna have them overlapping like that then you should try connect it some way.
    and for the demoh sketch if your planning on painting that or putting that name up i wouldnt theres a big frieght head who goes by that name. but over all good shit
     
  3. Sanc_one

    Sanc_one Senior Member

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  4. Sanc_one

    Sanc_one Senior Member

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    EDIT:what the fucking fuck double post! Sorry folks!
     
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  5. bleh.bleh.bleh

    bleh.bleh.bleh Senior Member

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    Curve the bottoms of the O's to the right that same as the other letters And There's something that needs to be do the the right leg of the R IMO but I don't quite know how to explain it.
     
  6. Baron

    Baron Moderator

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    Its all fucked up. Reminds me of something I did a year or two ago. Go to thick bars.
     
  7. Zase

    Zase Senior Member

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    sanc its been said
    turn those o s arround
    so the bottom will be filled more
    other than that nice style ur trying man
    but keep in mind that a letter needs to be known as a letter
    for example the R that looks a lil wierd
    not that it looks like a b but u know what i mean
     
  8. Sanc_one

    Sanc_one Senior Member

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    Thanks for all ya crits!
     
  9. Zase

    Zase Senior Member

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    ai44.tinypic.com_ymquv.jpg
    quick rough nasty bombing practice
     
  10. NO_1

    NO_1 Senior Member

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    thick bars?

    and if anyones curious

    ai8.photobucket.com_albums_a2_fender336_orange.jpg

    i hate this piece
     
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  11. Each

    Each Senior Member

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    zase- i would fix the z and the s but other than that i think it looks pretty fresh, not really feelin the train
     
  12. Backalley Abortion Doctor

    Backalley Abortion Doctor Elite Member

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  13. Each

    Each Senior Member

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    nice shit rots.
     
  14. T-jay

    T-jay Senior Member

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    rots-dope shit, like ure style
    no1-not too sure do and dont like it at the same time(is still alot better than me). the 3d looks clean
    Zase- clean basic,dont like the s

    critz
    ai196.photobucket.com_albums_aa291_tim44pix_menjinx_1.jpg
     
  15. Zase

    Zase Senior Member

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    rot its dope
    relik its good man nice work
    next step try all the letters the same hight and width
    do some block hoopups to kill dead space
    and try some other breakoffs not just a flat end
     
  16. T-jay

    T-jay Senior Member

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    thanks
    if i do all the letters the same height the ELI looks wierd as hell but ill try it again(did it a couple of weeks ago and didnt finish it)
    whats a block hoop up never heard of it but ive probally seen it
     
  17. NoCanControl

    NoCanControl Elite Member

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    rots always has a very creative mind, rarely following trends. i like it man.
     
  18. Backalley Abortion Doctor

    Backalley Abortion Doctor Elite Member

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  19. NoCanControl

    NoCanControl Elite Member

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  20. kill_fred

    kill_fred Senior Member

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    i saved this shit.sick.