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dekae thats straight. really feeling the d.

 

NEW YEAR

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W is kind of fucked up... I'll color this tomorrow.

Hal-I kinda like how you did the fourth one but I would tone it down.
Clout- Great job. The one above it has some fine coloring from what I can see.

 

hal.cyon-- you have cool letter structure, i just think your letters are too crowded together, maybe space them out a bit more? like the very last piece, the e and s are almost completely covered. you're headed in the right direction though, really dope stuff.

 

so dope clout...
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hal.cyon-lookin good 3d some of them
eskimo-not feeling the n at all, the rest is good
thatguywhodrinkstea-work on 3d alot,not feeling the e's,dontlike the second one to much cuz of the n

 

Bump.

 

on the bottom one i think the top left of the r is alittle to thick but besides that it looks dope

 

hey guys i don't post much but i've finaly got a new camera so i've ran out of excuses to not post


Crits :

dekae : looks very clean, as said before make the whole in the D smaller and i don't like how the leg of the K overlaps the A

eskimo : the extension on the bottom left leg of the R that goes behind the A seems out of place.

hal : space em out a bit and try to go over it so it has darker lines or something to make it cleaner. maybe do a fil i'd love to see how it comes out

here is some stuff crits would be awesome so i know where i'm at



This one is old old old as hell. it says Sketch. done with highlighters

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Did this today. My name. should be readable enough

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Old as well. Says Rezen ( btw can anyone tell me if this name is taken? )
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How does that say rezen?

 

halycon, eskimo keep up the good work.

and i finally did your exchange zase. this has got to be the first full sketch i've done in a good 4 months. lifes a bitch. but here it is



now you have to do mine

 

Could have done without the Arrow on the Z

 

zase-- really nice but i would take the arrow off the z
ilikepie-- really cool i like them a lot. only thing i would do like osmeone else said is maybe take that extra thing off the back of the R. i don't think it would make it too empty.

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alright, here's something i did today. pretty simple. sorry, it's a cell pic. only thing i don't really like about it is the fill cuz it's shitty colored pencils. and i wish i had something to do highlights with.... crits??

 

loose the connections, then bring the letters closer to each other

 

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Better?

 

You've progressed like crazy.

EDIT- new sketch---

 

yo suga tits, use a k next time, it seems like it would be a bit easier to make flow with that style, i love you, no mo, kiss my tits/grits. abor, out.

 

are you trying to say you dont like it?

 

yeah, that was my second guess but i didnt think youd be that gay. why am i covered in blood?

 

ilikepie: i like the sketch but i wont lie i have no idea what it says?

marsone: i love the new years sketch, the letters are all do except the N its confusing as shit
but all and all its good stuff

here is some of my more recent stuff, it says boo, im trying some differnt styles

crits please