relik thats good u listend now as u did the R with the block hookup u can do the L with the underbar too like upwords and the K on the back and the E u know what i mean anyways im back
Ok maybe because the image is bigger but everyone is telling me that the one that i knew was bad is bad i wanted crits more on this one which is recent. please? [Broken External Image]:http://img76.imageshack.us/img76/2228/dscn0039ml0.th.jpg
ehm dont do one hour over that waste of time man its good too see some bars but is the middle letter a v? try keeping the letters same height and width also the 3d is like hardcore off work on that aswell and fatten the letters up mayne if ya need 3d help ill pop sum for you but now imma sleep
Buhmmmp. Rots, that shit's funny. Not hipStar enough though, try adding cool fingers pointing and whatnot.
zase- good job.. only problem i have is that the a kinda looks like an h ra- dope rots- funny stuff. unless its not meant to be a joke.... sers- keep the bars the same width mue- take less time on sketches and just keep doing what your doing. try a lot of fast freestyles with pens. give yourself like 5 mins for a sketch and do 12 or more in an hour. thats probably one of the best methods of getting simples down. posting here so that i can get crits. more concerned about the sketched one than the bottom simple since i freestyled the simple and am actually trying on the top one. View attachment 437704 View attachment 437705 sry about the double pic. was too big for my scanner
nothing much to say about that, its pretty solid other then the bars, what else do i need to fix up in my flick?
your working with simples so as long as you know about bars and keeping them the same/only 2 widths all you need to do is keep sketchin and keep trying out new stuff. then once your simples are solid/come easily to you you can try adding extensions etc
Rab on the last one you bumped I think the R would look better with the kick curving back in like the B, ya know.. Rots - That S is tight. Zase - The A is pretty fucked. Everything else about it is pretty solid. Temp - Maybe the left vertical bar of the M needs to slope more to the left, mirroring the right vertical bar, ya know? eh
thx clout. i see what your saying. im gonna have to find a way to do it w/o creating deadspace and w/o cutting into the e but i should be able to...
zase-- really sick. everyone pretty much covered the crits. cakewalk99-- try making straight up and down bars first rots-- madd good