Kire - Use imageshack.

 

Sanc-don't like the fill. I takes away from the letter structure.
Stussy- I like it, but whats up with the random bar on the A?
408- I don't like the tails

Simp I did, I want to color it....
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Close up on cowboy:
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that's so dope man, please other thread i get mad at myself if i see this iwant to be such goood

 

thanks man..its not that good is it?? and apparently my word is shit so i gotta change it but thanks for the crits

 

no man i mean it
i got an idea lets battle
lets write pain oke?

laterking

 

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I like it ^ Last letter is kind of messed up but I like what you did with it.

 

Sweet colorsceme sanc!

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pak een andere naam man

 

Waarom?

 

gast je naam is poep dat is gewoon niet cool

translation:

man your name means shit thats not cool

 

That's just a matter of opinion....don't take things to serious!
Since when is there a no cursing rule?
Your comming from a country with writers like nger and anus for example....and you have a chick poaring milk over her very good looking body in your signature! I'm pritty shure there are people who will find that disgusting, it's just a matter of opinion.

now what about some advice on my sketch?

 

haha digggingg itt. As well as the Immortal Technique quote.

Poep/Poeg?: Don't invert the last letter, unless it's supposed to be a G. The letters are pretty solid, but the fangs thing is kinda lame.

 

Thanx for the critz I guess spore kind off got to me with the spiky stuff!

 

Kjay - I don't like the bottom of the Z and the I bar doesn't match up with the rest of the bar sizes.
Sanc - Not digging the eyes, but I hella like the pink.
Poeg - Not exactly liking the spikes, but it looks good overall

 

bububump?

 

I think it looks pretty good. Is the character supposed to be like a cowboy smoking? I cant really tell. The top bar on the A looks a little thick but other than that I think it looks good.

 

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been bitin alot of shit just tryin to get the idea of how to put shit together i try and throw in a bit of my own ideas into it too do these look alright?? the only thing i noticed with these is there is like no light source but does it look weird the way they are??? also the only one with letters is the colored on its CJM dont know why the bars just kinda went and the C was real easy

and i know my shading is horrible and my lines are super shakey but i have been tryin to work on that lately

zen- i like the simple but dont really like the character
kjay- watch proportions

 

Thanks all of you guys for comments. Here is new sketch. Oh and that what is writen in cloud means: " Delicious as fuck" .... Cuz JABKA in my language means Apple ..
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