^ don't listen to this NIC guy. You have talent man.
That looks so mad nice.

 

I didnt really say anything bad about it... just the fact that the blue at the bottom of the letters overlaps a bit... I think its a nice piece

 

sanc one thats looking sweet man



Crits?

 

Thats is probably the most obvious bite off my shit I have ever seen....take influence don't try to replicate.
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for example a flick I posted a while ago....look at my D and R.

 

random i found that i dont remember doing



and my new throw

 

Remos, I really like the third one with the lower case I, just seems to flow nice. Although the S just seems a little overdone.
Kjay- I like the red marker stipe things you did for the fill.

And now mine...I did a simp with skinnier bars a made it less boxy, then I tried a throw and...whatever the last one is. Oh, and I touched up my cowboy (Fuck just realized I forgot his star....Imagine he has one lol)

Let me know if the throw/last thing are too much too fast.

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is this any good guys

 

id love to see how you progressed into this ish, looks like [Broken External Image]:http://img192.imageshack.us/img192/293/screencapture25.png

 

b.s. police : i love that sig hahaha

 

looks good other than the O which u pointed out

 

Kjay I would fatten up the top bar on the Z to make it more like the E or vice-versa.

Anybody have any crits for my stuff?

 

Zen- don't write saeg, pick a name that has some flow to it so you can learn to manipulate strange words like saeg

 

Hmm I picked saeg because I liked the letters, I guess I don't really see how words can flow, isn't it just how you write them?

 

some stuff iv been doin lately,I might start writin "slack"... still dont know yet though


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doesn't say anything i know the light part of the letters looks a little weird... any advice on how to shade or whatever and get it all even?
slack- that top one is pretty clean i dont like the bottom one the K throws it all off
cyto- i know its a rough sketch but i dont like it at all

 

you know it says menek right?

 

^^ was that reffered to me?? if so i have no idea what relivence that has to what i said but ya either way i dont think it looks to hot