Bottom of page bump. ILikePie....do you just mean go simpler and chill on the extensions and hookups and shit? I got a bit ahead of myself. How do my basic letters look under all the shit?
same here man they are just idk but try makeing them like straight standing because your r looks twisted turn it counter clockwise..?
i like pie- you got that steez going on and i like it mers-the fill is eye pleasing crits?? [Broken External Image]:http://i355.photobucket.com/albums/r455/jesus_wuz_here/PIC_0142.jpg ps did this in school so thats why its lined paper
[Broken External Image]:http://img23.imageshack.us/img23/4594/p6013373.jpg VILE so somethin i did no bite at all with this one just me i dont like the shading on the green pieces but still crits? and i know people probably think im not takin the crits but i have been i got this damn drawing book thing of like real shit and for shading that i have been workin on and shit so ya im workin on my "realistic" drawings and i figure these letters are pretty basic so i dont think im gettin too ahead of myself with this neaz- looks just like the last thing you put up more variety kaiser- you got the art part like your fills and stuff but i agree work on your letters more it looks good but could be better kjay- it seems really sloppy to me try and clean it up? and watch proportions
omg knoxin's kinda getting it :O lol but the e is outta place i think and yeah i know im just trying to make it better but okay ill try to mix it up more
Some random stuff I did today. I really want to put together a throwie, so extra crits on that please? haha... View attachment 482162 View attachment 482163 Neaz- don't like the E maybe try doing it differently Knox- it's tight that you are trying new stuff. It is looking better too.
You've got fills, shine, and 3D down. Now work on your letters, Ian. M, for example, should have longer legs, which you can do by putting the lines further up while still maintaining the proportions.
Okay, I've gotten some good crits, thanks...sounds like I need to trash all the fancy 3D's and shit until I figure out some basic letters, so I'm gonna hit the books...I just wnated to bump these one last time to ask what I did RIGHT in any of my basic letters, so I have something to work from you know? I thought for example the basic bars in my N in the second word worked alright, should I work with that, or do I really just need to start over from bars? (Last Bump, sorry) View attachment 482256 View attachment 482257
bump/ cyto- if that third letter is a N you probably shouldn't connect the bars at the bottom near the bottom stick of the E