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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.

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  1. Kaiser71

    Kaiser71 Senior Member

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    Bottom of page bump.

    ILikePie....do you just mean go simpler and chill on the extensions and hookups and shit? I got a bit ahead of myself. How do my basic letters look under all the shit?
     
  2. IlikePie

    IlikePie Elite Member

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    Kill the extensions, add ons, and work on your letters alone, 'cuz they're lacking.
     
  3. VaNdAL xBA!x

    VaNdAL xBA!x Banned

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    Yo pie you have trouble makin your a's on your throws
    because i fuckin hate em
     
  4. B.S. POLICE

    B.S. POLICE Banned

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  5. IlikePie

    IlikePie Elite Member

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    [Insert Ugly Throw Here]

    As you can see, I have trouble with throws in general.
     
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  6. B.S. POLICE

    B.S. POLICE Banned

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  7. slipyslipyslipymegeee

    slipyslipyslipymegeee Senior Member

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    same here man they are just idk but try makeing them like straight standing because your r looks twisted turn it counter clockwise..?
     
  8. IlikePie

    IlikePie Elite Member

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    This is why I don't do throws. Ever.
     
  9. VaNdAL xBA!x

    VaNdAL xBA!x Banned

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    the green one is straight
    the blue r is ok i jus dont like the a
    jus keep fuckin around with it
     
  10. Graff J up

    Graff J up Senior Member

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  11. KnoxIn

    KnoxIn Senior Member

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    [Broken External Image]:http://img23.imageshack.us/img23/4594/p6013373.jpg
    VILE
    so somethin i did no bite at all with this one just me i dont like the shading on the green pieces but still crits? and i know people probably think im not takin the crits but i have been i got this damn drawing book thing of like real shit and for shading that i have been workin on and shit so ya im workin on my "realistic" drawings and i figure these letters are pretty basic so i dont think im gettin too ahead of myself with this

    neaz- looks just like the last thing you put up more variety
    kaiser- you got the art part like your fills and stuff but i agree work on your letters more it looks good but could be better

    kjay- it seems really sloppy to me try and clean it up? and watch proportions
     
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  12. Graff J up

    Graff J up Senior Member

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    omg knoxin's kinda getting it :O
    lol but the e is outta place i think

    and yeah i know im just trying to make it better but okay ill try to mix it up more
     
  13. true Zen

    true Zen Senior Member

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    Some random stuff I did today. I really want to put together a throwie, so extra crits on that please? haha...

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    Neaz- don't like the E maybe try doing it differently
    Knox- it's tight that you are trying new stuff. It is looking better too.
     
  14. CrustOner

    CrustOner Elite Member

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    You've got fills, shine, and 3D down. Now work on your letters, Ian. M, for example, should have longer legs, which you can do by putting the lines further up while still maintaining the proportions.
     
  15. milk boxx

    milk boxx Senior Member

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    crits on this before I ink it?
     
  16. Cyto Aka Son1c

    Cyto Aka Son1c Elite Member

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  17. Fluffy Bunnies

    Fluffy Bunnies Elite Member

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    poopstains



    i wana exchange
    i write kils
     
  18. true Zen

    true Zen Senior Member

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    bump
     
  19. Kaiser71

    Kaiser71 Senior Member

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    Okay, I've gotten some good crits, thanks...sounds like I need to trash all the fancy 3D's and shit until I figure out some basic letters, so I'm gonna hit the books...I just wnated to bump these one last time to ask what I did RIGHT in any of my basic letters, so I have something to work from you know? I thought for example the basic bars in my N in the second word worked alright, should I work with that, or do I really just need to start over from bars?

    (Last Bump, sorry)
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  20. milk boxx

    milk boxx Senior Member

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    bump/
    cyto- if that third letter is a N you probably shouldn't connect the bars at the bottom near the bottom stick of the E