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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.

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  1. COBALT

    COBALT Elite Member

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    simple not finished
     
  2. Reincarnation

    Reincarnation Senior Member

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    I just started like 4 months ago lol
     
  3. BigBlueViolence

    BigBlueViolence Elite Member

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  4. true Zen

    true Zen Senior Member

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    Jema- That is really classy, the "a" seems to tower over the other letters though....

    Susp- I can't really read it, I would keep it simpler for now use bars and such...

    Strange- I don't really like the end of your S, the part that looks like a big arrow. It just doesn't seem to flow. But that is just my opinion.

    Doodling with pen in class...
    I want to develop a throwie.

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  5. sketch_three

    sketch_three Banned

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  6. true Zen

    true Zen Senior Member

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  7. Reincarnation

    Reincarnation Senior Member

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    Aight zen thats for the crit and im 15
     
  8. Reincarnation

    Reincarnation Senior Member

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    Aight zen thats for the crit
     
  9. ReallyTrustFullStrangers

    ReallyTrustFullStrangers Senior Member

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    its a z......how come everyone thinks its a s?? its clearly a z lol w.e thnx tho
     
  10. true Zen

    true Zen Senior Member

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    If everybody thinks it is an "S", it is by no means clearly a "Z".
     
  11. sketch_three

    sketch_three Banned

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    cuss it so awfull people try and interpet it as somting a lil less wack


    i mean its a crappy s,
    but its a z then holy beltbuckle u need to quit
     
  12. garbage down tha way

    garbage down tha way Elite Member

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    canvas, fo sale i need da cash.



    reallytrustfull- the letter z should only have 3 bars total. lose the hook on the bottom brotha.

    saeg- keep practicing youre doing ok. dont but extra bars at the end of your bars.
     
  13. Kaiser71

    Kaiser71 Senior Member

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    Crite...

    Hoer...Love the colors, but I kind of think that they pull the focus away from the piece...unless that was your intention

    Saeg- good to see your using bars, but it looks like your using too many. Your letters seem to hbave too many corners and points. Keep at it

    Reincarnation- Bars

    ReallyTrust-- I think you should probably go simpler. I like your 3D fill, but the actual structure looks too forced to me.

    Sorry to anyone I missed...

    Okay..got a new extrafine pen..so I felt like working on making clean lines and shit...I've been told my structure needs a lot of work...so crits for that would be good...

    Not Finished..
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  14. smooth_nuts

    smooth_nuts Elite Member

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    how much hoer,i'm actualy looking for some "art" for my room...
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    just a lonely simple on a loney sticker.
     
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  15. slipyslipyslipymegeee

    slipyslipyslipymegeee Senior Member

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    isnt that why this is the TOY form? hmm...
     
  16. Aesir

    Aesir Senior Member

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    Lol smooth I'm in a crew called 'OK' and what happened to DOAP?
     
  17. Kaiser71

    Kaiser71 Senior Member

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    Poor letter structure/Bottom of page BUMP.
     
  18. slipyslipyslipymegeee

    slipyslipyslipymegeee Senior Member

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    i like the idea but idk im just not feeling it
     
  19. garbage down tha way

    garbage down tha way Elite Member

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    40 bucks. im trying to get it into this upcoming art show to sell it for more but if it doesnt work out ill let you know. nice simp by the way ;)
     
  20. smooth_nuts

    smooth_nuts Elite Member

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    oh word?
    well,i write ok now,so i could honestly careless ;)
    ...and as for doap,shit happens,nuf said.

    and hoers
    if that shit doesnt pan out for you
    hit me up i'll cop it.