Kaiser- letter structure isnt that horrible.. i dont think.. i like the way you used add ons.. they really are dope.. i was mostly just talking about the m.. the other two letters im not so hot on.. make other strokes thick like you did on the back extension of the M Okae- pretty dope simp dude.. see what happens if you make the bars a little thicker.. otherwise good work.. Reincarnation- check out the new to graf thread.. work on a handstyle, and work with bars.. just simps, all day A' day! been doing some serious sketchin lately... ffirst 4 new, last 2 older, but got no crits.. View attachment 483214 View attachment 483215 View attachment 483216 View attachment 483217 View attachment 483218 View attachment 483219 crits aye!
yeah just that last little bit of the arrow i could'nt decided to 3d it or not !??!? but fuck it the rest of that s looks much better than my usual shit lol so thanks for the comment hole did for a friend : thinking it could have been better yo snew good shizzle
if your handstyle is fly, turn it into bars, and turn it into letters.. its that easy.. i see your handy on the top of your drawing and it looked less than "fly" im not trying to start anything your letters are wack, take direction from someone a little bit established..
Zestee-- Deffinately lose some bubble, and I think the slime stuff is overused by a lot of people. To be honest, there's too much going on for me to really crit your bars, but they don't look too bad? Snew- Dope Simples, not feeling the top two as much as any of the others though. Meko- Not really feelig the arrows or the top right extension on your M. Or the handstyle, but I know how hard that shit is on a computer. Nice work with it otherwise Okae- Solid simp. I think I gave crits to most of the other peopl early or on the page before. First page of my new blackbook....already regretting the color choices. Still trying really hard to develop a style that works...maybe too hard? Crit? View attachment 483318
Um, taking that not as a joke, then dude go to the new to graff thread, because that shit is wack, back to the bars for you man.
Ha. I like it. I agree you could give the cap some 3D. It would look dope with some big high tops on his feet or something. Bu I guess that is kind of overdone in characters.
haha man I love your cap character and I guess ill work on my handstyle more but I actually though it was pretty good...
Like my 3rd attempt at a straight letter...Starting off with bars and all that. [Broken External Image]:http://i207.photobucket.com/albums/bb33/skateboard23/0605092235.jpg crits? Mers- Love your throw, sick bart haha