I used bars man...Theres no reason to pretend haha.

 

zarb your drop shadow is like reallllllly of on the whole thing basicly its like taeing it off the paper and haveing a light on a side and it makes a shadow but just keep working on it and you get it like read alilttle about shadows or something idfk

 

i think its time we bring my cap man back into the spotlight for crits, because zarb is most certainly using bars, but doesn't know how to put a shadow behind something, so here cap man once again.

 

Zarb I had to have my cousin explain drop shadow to me just think about the way it would look with the sun shining on it the shadow would either go to the left or the right. I mean I understand the concept of it but its just hard for me to do because of my skill level

 

why dose it look like you did it on the computer

 

hes not using bars, or his structer would line up,
but wat do i care

 

^^^Its true^^^^

Surprise, but theres a difference between Box letters, and true Bar Usage

 

imo do diff. types of tips

ie. german tip, german guy jus some short fat fuck

german tip - hitler

ny skinny - ny hipsters or w/e

ny fat - huuuge fat fucks or bankers an shit



i dunno jus throwin shit out there

 

stop fucking qouating it its on the same page


btw it looks likee shit

 

Here's some sketches, crits would be much appreciated

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"large and in charge" not finished yet

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Slum Scum

 

my bad ha

 

i dont like capman's feet, but the rest has potential ^^

 

because i scanned it in, cropped it, and boosted the contrast, but i did the whole thing in my book in sharpie. besides i cant do anything resembling art for shit with a mouse.

 

Well i've just joined here so i take it i live in this part of the forum...

Looking for crits on how to advance this style ... ive done a more recent one and ill get that up soon but its pretty much the same just better 3d... Crits will be greatly appreciated

 

imo you should pick one point that all ur 3D is going down too, rather than a line full of different points

 

Crit these aswell please

thats the 3d your meaning ? I just learnt it on that sketch ?

and heres a new style im gunna play with

 

Anarone, i think youre 3D to letter ratio is a bit off, like too much 3d for your letters. Not sure my oppinion is valid yet though

Bumpage for crits.

 

master i did a lil bit of paint editing to show you how i think the piece could flow better...