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wats with all the dots on the outside yo, your pencil stokes should all be going in the same direnction and the extra lines besides the letter should be out, its nice though

 

I dig it, jups.
you need a bottom for your R, though.

 

i got cut from the big dog thread... i guess big dogs just like that euro steezy

 

thats pretty dope.especially the hands...idk why theyd drop you that shit is cool man.

 

handy's is on point, diggin the characters too. try to define your letters more in your pieces though

 

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critics

 

read the sig above you^

 

jupsick im feeling that style except that extension on the r makes it hard to tell its an r

 

attention to all you lazy fuckers who are trying to get crits.give crits to get crits or gtfo.whats the point in this thread if no one gives crits?none at all.it will take five minutes of your time and will save this thread from being completely fucking useless.




that is all.

 

fuck how is this the toy section when i see sick shit on here i dont understand

 

mero ftw

bloodandmoney: not sure who told you that you belong in this thread but you definitely dont that stuff is real good.

 

Crits?
Trend: New to Graff thread, I've told you before.
bloodlandmoney: GTFO. At least go to the intermediate thread, man. haha.
Jupsick: Work on that R. Sweet simple though.
Dunsy: Forget the drips and the cap on the I. (for SIMPLE).
Salty: Keep practicing man, and work on your handy.

 

crust im not one to talk since my letters suck balls but about that color scheme tha first thing that came to mind was a medieval fair or somethin.. not sayin its bad but personally i wouldnt use those colors together.

 

haha the colors look a hell of a lot better in person, that's a cell phone picture.

 

yea but the letterererereres argggh weak

 

haha ye i hate it when they dont show up tha way it actually looks in person. by tha way imma PM you latr bout that ink

 

new/hand fell apart writing ichiban. even though its a shitty block letter style anyway. but yeah done voicing my pity.


test run, crits please

Crust- i see what theyre saying with the color set its still pretty spot on though

 

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^^^^Its been a while but can I get some crits?

Mero-STFU befor I post your frist entry with the mist battle for lolz. jk
Jup- Work on your flow, but your letters are pretty stuctured keep sketchin
SS- you basing your throw off of other pplz. No callin it a bite but its look pretty influenced. Try to be orginal, and work on you handstyle.
Trend- Your tryin to hard with the R and your N look like a lower case H. work on that
Crust- Use bars....Cause your structure is lacking...
Blood- your Throwie is hot but I not feelin the peices.