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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.

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  1. OctoVenom

    OctoVenom Senior Member

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    that ill my n1gga
     
  2. Dr. Fisher

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  3. 00-made-00

    00-made-00 Elite Member

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    Dr.fish - the top sketch is nice man, just work with that and you'll do well.
    SOS - too wild too soon, i don't think you need to put extensions on every letter, good letters are not made by extensions, there made by good letters.
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    A simple i like.
     
  4. (SoS)Viruz

    (SoS)Viruz Elite Member

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    I feel it Kabre told me to take off the Point stuff too. :)
     
  5. MyNameIsMAX

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    Critics would be great. *EDIT* Cause those crayola pencil crayons and markers are the best for graffiti NOT.

    Dr. Fisher - Im feelin the top and second sketch, not so much the third, the Z seems too skinny too me in th center but the others are a pretty good start

    Jups - Good handstyles, the R seems like it is too covered near the bottom maybe try different layering
     
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  6. Dr. Fisher

    Dr. Fisher Member

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    thank you
     
  7. Mr yarbles

    Mr yarbles Elite Member

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    This shit is hella dope man you should get this up
     
  8. TheMurderousMisterMero_

    TheMurderousMisterMero_ Banned

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    you wouldnt dAre....



    would you???
     
  9. SSichiban1

    SSichiban1 Member

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    sos-thats slick man. and your right, im just looking for a starting point. thanks though ill work on it
    fish-those are lookin solid, 2nd one has a nice style to it
     
  10. salty302

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  11. seywhat

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    yo pila, i think if you put a little add-on to your p like the a it would balance it out a little more, you feel me?
     
  12. funhouseXcast

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  13. KnoxIn

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    [Broken External Image]:http://img197.imageshack.us/img197/3103/p6163746.jpg
    hey i have been workin on this piece thats going to say CITY but i cant get the goddamn Y i have been workin on it for like 2 weeks and i cant get a good Y so anyone want to sketch a good one with some style in it for me?? ill do a exchange or somethin i just need a good Y and if you can try and get it to flow with this ^^^
     
  14. salty302

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  15. diggitydoggz

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    dr. fisher - not sure about the first one, the second two are decent simps, just fix that k on the last one its fukked up looking

    pila - nice, clean simple.. not much really to crit about it.. i like that swirly shit though.

    macs - keep working at it, try using bars, and ur first two letters don't match the last two at all in style, thickness, or pretty much anything other than color

    spaak - use bars. i hate to sound like a prick but review the new to graff thread and go simpler until the really simple ones look mad nice. the letters don't really look like they match and the k looks really messed up

    KnoxIn - that looks like it's going to be pretty sick. the C and T look mad cool, especially with the 3d and all.

    here's some new shit i've been working on

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  16. Shurik*n

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    macs: try to widen the m's middle line a bit..same with the a. we'll see what we got from there
     
  17. LUCIFER_RISING

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    diggity your pics arent showing up for me
    try it again
     
  18. diggitydoggz

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  19. KnoxIn

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    [Broken External Image]:http://img193.imageshack.us/img193/4241/p6163755.jpg
    CITY
    i am so dissapointed in how this turned out background is alright but i thought it would look weird if i used colored pencils so i tryed shading with my markers didn't work so i couldn't really do the whole 3-d affect and the Y is horrible i just dont like it but still crits??

    diggity- there alright just watch your proportions and your little extensions on your letters some of those are off

    salty- the SPA looks good but not the others keep at it though
    pila- good simple
     
  20. salty302

    salty302 Guest

    i like that background...i only like that S in my spa thinking about using it just rounding curve more