Dr.fish - the top sketch is nice man, just work with that and you'll do well. SOS - too wild too soon, i don't think you need to put extensions on every letter, good letters are not made by extensions, there made by good letters. View attachment 485785 A simple i like.
View attachment 485792 Critics would be great. *EDIT* Cause those crayola pencil crayons and markers are the best for graffiti NOT. Dr. Fisher - Im feelin the top and second sketch, not so much the third, the Z seems too skinny too me in th center but the others are a pretty good start Jups - Good handstyles, the R seems like it is too covered near the bottom maybe try different layering
sos-thats slick man. and your right, im just looking for a starting point. thanks though ill work on it fish-those are lookin solid, 2nd one has a nice style to it
yo pila, i think if you put a little add-on to your p like the a it would balance it out a little more, you feel me?
[Broken External Image]:http://img197.imageshack.us/img197/3103/p6163746.jpg hey i have been workin on this piece thats going to say CITY but i cant get the goddamn Y i have been workin on it for like 2 weeks and i cant get a good Y so anyone want to sketch a good one with some style in it for me?? ill do a exchange or somethin i just need a good Y and if you can try and get it to flow with this ^^^
http://www.bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/showthread.php?t=4584&page=61 look at the dyse and easy shit in this link if u want a y
dr. fisher - not sure about the first one, the second two are decent simps, just fix that k on the last one its fukked up looking pila - nice, clean simple.. not much really to crit about it.. i like that swirly shit though. macs - keep working at it, try using bars, and ur first two letters don't match the last two at all in style, thickness, or pretty much anything other than color spaak - use bars. i hate to sound like a prick but review the new to graff thread and go simpler until the really simple ones look mad nice. the letters don't really look like they match and the k looks really messed up KnoxIn - that looks like it's going to be pretty sick. the C and T look mad cool, especially with the 3d and all. here's some new shit i've been working on [Broken External Image]:http://img191.imageshack.us/img191/241/img000846.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://img195.imageshack.us/img195/849/img000849.jpg
that's weird, i've never had imageshack not work for me. but here's some direct links: http://img191.imageshack.us/img191/241/img000846.jpg http://img195.imageshack.us/img195/849/img000849.jpg
[Broken External Image]:http://img193.imageshack.us/img193/4241/p6163755.jpg CITY i am so dissapointed in how this turned out background is alright but i thought it would look weird if i used colored pencils so i tryed shading with my markers didn't work so i couldn't really do the whole 3-d affect and the Y is horrible i just dont like it but still crits?? diggity- there alright just watch your proportions and your little extensions on your letters some of those are off salty- the SPA looks good but not the others keep at it though pila- good simple
i like that background...i only like that S in my spa thinking about using it just rounding curve more