quick one
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critics please i gave em, id like some back please.

 

...we have been

 

this doesn't apply to you (the guy who just asked for crits) but for anyone who is putting up pics without giving crits, GIVE CRITS TO GET THEM, this forum isn't just for people to help you it's for you to help us too. no matter how noob you are you can always offer something of value.

 

stop all your fucking complaining and just DO.

ur fuckin lucky u guys even GET crits.

 

pila nice and flan looks great

fish great concept i like the name

city the backround is cool but idk about the letters atleast go bigger with them because it looks awkward

i would say quick piece but i've been working on it off and on
crits
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Good to see your trying to use bars, the thing you need to work on is just placing the letters better, from there itll be golden

 

yeah thanks i re did it but the u is always a lil bitch to me haha but im working on it

 

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I drew these up before i seen this post looks alot better not sure about the S on the second one.

 

OctoVenom i like the second pic, the can in the back pretty sick i donno about the wings though. lookin pretty sick

 

ding thats a nice simple right there.....all u other kids needa do tha same

 

chuy- nice lettering, color hurts my eyes, but in a way i think thats a cool thing
cyber- first peice is my nice, but i might make the bottom line on the "E" a little thicker, second peice, might wanna work on your wings but i like the idea
macs- nice simps, on the second peice, try to keep your drips straight.

 

cyber im not feeling that B at allllll but i do like where ur going with ur work ...

macs diggin tha simps. i dont kno about that extension u dropped down on tha M in tha first flick ... could b construed as a H. i would tighten errything up in tha second flick and def work on that S

 

yeah that can is fresh and macs that red one is good work with that

and yeah dude i fucked up with the red prisma it wasnt suppose to be that dark =[

 

yeah that can is fresh and macs that red one is good work with that

and yeah dude i fucked up with the red prisma it wasnt suppose to be that dark =[

 

Crits:
Macs- For the the red one fix the M a lil cause it kinda looks like an H. For the blue one I'd remove the bubbles and drips just for now.
Cyber- I like those accept the middle one, its hard to tell that the 3rd letter is a B. And on the 3rd peice I'd remove the extension coming from the top of the R. Those colours are also really nicee.
Chuy- Lookin good, not much for the colours though. And your 3D is kinda weird on the C.
Krep- Good simple, but Id make the top bar of the E more straight.

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Hey anyone want to do a exchange im tryin to get a variety in my style so i gotta try different letters pm me if your down

 

I'm really like the colors you used on that, they are sort of unusual. Interesting letter setup also.