Serg...I like your alphabet...but none of your pieces really...maybwe you should work with those letters? Vader...I'd lose the tiny arrows and work on the right leg of the R Knak...I think over all just go a bit simpler? Not really feelin' the squiggle on the N either. I was told to work on my flow...still not there yet....unfinished....crits? View attachment 496654
mers ur handstyle is =[ but the piece looks cool but still needs some flow. for example the e looks cramped in and straight compared to the m thats \ get me?
vader - its different i like it... lose the white bits though pronynja - use your alphabet letters there are okay kaiser71 - shit fresh but get a fuckin handy dank - start from scratch... beginners thread knar - im not really feelin it looks like a shit handy with 3d sheltr - not really feelin it... i cant even read it, and no that isnt a good thing [Broken External Image]:http://img294.imageshack.us/img294/714/picture1ncz.png
I dig vaders..it would be too plain without a little bit of detail..maybe lose the large block of white on the E to even it out a little bit. and im feelin that E, jawsyyy
yo emes that shit's banging yo, shit's all loose with it. give it a sick fill, I fucked up on your name, if you want I'll scan the trainwreckage... I'mma do another one soon just haven't had time
Jawsy-prettty nice, some extensions don't look great like on the top of the P and on the leg of the R. Some parts of the letters are just too fat it seems, just keep playing with it and simplify if you need to but i like it. M+S - do some straight letters and if i were you i'd ditch that little loop thing, they look ok with chizel tips in handstyles but not on pieces. Bit of refining to my other sketch, still gotta make some proportion adjustments and stuff but will be outlining and paint very soon.
some shit ive been fucking with lately haters welcome! posted in the intermediate thread but i just want to hear what everyone thinks