Thanks haha. I already knew my proportions were off and stuff, but I was trying to do a throwie, instead of just a simple. I get what you mean about the merging part. Do you mean like this? [Broken External Image]:http://img20.imageshack.us/img20/2013/img0238eif.jpg Crits! 99% - I don't really like the fill, but the rest looks good. ding1 - Work on the proportions of the K, and I'm not digging the R that much. Rek - I like the style, but work on proportions and the 3D. Janek - I like Viruz's a lot, and BBV's looks okay. The only recommendation I have is lose the line for Viruz's.
Slipy- Real nice color selection, only crits i have is to make the left leg of the A visible cause it kinda looks like a Y, Also on the Z i would make the top indent deeper.Nice work. Arsen-I dont really do throws so i cant crit to much, but keep all the letters the same size because you have it progressively getting smaller towards the end fix that and it will look loads better. Murphy's Law-I really like the karaks if you started doing them with colors instead of just black and white i think you'd be set. I havent been on here in awhile just been sticking to the blackbook lately, this piece here was inspired by my first dmt trip where I experienced visuals like these letters reaching across the night sky. plz crit. Edit: and here is a karak that the dose from phish gave me.
Amends, simplify and define. The double thick is nice, but I think you should have a more defined outline. Emek, if you're gonna rock the same letter twice and have it be real similar, make sure it's really similar. Otherwise, good start. All that hipster steeze talk got me motivated a lil. My hands are still being quite unsteady, hopefully I'll have some cleaner stuff on the weekend and I'm bunned.
Simple calligraphy style burner. [Broken External Image]:http://i705.photobucket.com/albums/ww55/Duddits/draw026-1.jpg
Ya the e is pretty weak. I was sitting in a car trying to draw from memory and couldnt remember what callig e's look like.