Yeah man i know i'm asking for it but i haven't really got anything. All I've ever got is "simpler." Thats like telling someone who can't throw a football very well to change the way they throw. It's very vague. Whatever I hear is fine. I'm not expecting anything I know i'm not the best. No beef here.
there was no beefing about it. i just had a rant cuz arguing over the internet is lame. and fighting over art is one of the most weakest/pointless things i think someone could do. i say persue the old school once u get going empty can. just mirror the image on both the ends(as in u do something on one side you do on the other). n have a good middle letter. all about structure so on and so on
Mmk so in the mist of all the arguing I think my crits got lost. So aside from "go simplier" (which for the record I got a pretty decent explanation for) any other crits. "Drop this. This looks fine. Try this i think it'll help." Etc. I think I'm kinda lookin for a homework assignment of sorts ya know. Tell me how to improve any of the pics that I threw up and I'll have some wherez to go from there. Preciated
no arguing. i just like to be an asshole so that people will learn from it. its how i teach. n e ways so predator. the first one. i can hardly tell what it is. a C im guessing. trying to distinguish it as more of a c. so no arrows. get rid of whats on the top part. get rid of the thing on the bottom left of it . keep the bars of your letters the same ALL the same size n bring the top closer to the right. so it looks like a c. on the second one the first b is good just get rid of that arrow. NO ARROWS. the second b get rid of that wart looking thing on the top left sticking out. and get rid of that whale tail looking thing on the bottom right n ur good. on the third . like i said keep the bars of the letters all the same size n get rid of the bottom left thing. on the second c get rid of how it like comes out to a point on the bottom n top part of the c. keep it simple. as in straight bars . on the third c brind the left side of it more toward the left n have that top left thing not be touching the top part of the c. there ya go bro
shit id say bring the circle part of the p down more to fill that space. you want equal spacing and equal sizing. you dont want fat holes in the middle of the pieces.
YOu guys are a bunch of retarted retards saying go simpler isn't a crit We can't help you with your terrible letters because they are fucking terrible Once you go simpler we can start to help you out When everything is shit you can't really improve when you don't have the essentials down so quit your fucking complaining like a bunch of pussies and go simpler. If your homie gave you a rotten apple you wouldn't eat it you'd ask for one that wasn't rotten
View attachment 509705 Yes I know it's not "simple" but I was trying something new. Trying shit won't hurt. THe shading on my S is a little too light. Please give some real crits.
Polar Looks like you went fatter at the bottom of your L". it kind of kills the A" Same try keyboard letters
that last sketch is pretty hard.the 3d needs to be a bit more consistent in the patern. the blocks at the bottom of the T would look better going the same direction as the middle block
Back off trest Only I can be a dick to someone then tell them I teach because they need to learn the hard way then give them tips after some beef
haha then u know its an efficient way of teaching. i think its the only way they'll get it... not trying to steal your rep ayyy lol
I say get rid of the arrow. n try not to have so many notches or w/e. like make ur letters look more smoother. n that top cross bar needs to go on the H. it looks like an a. idk ur close but it looks like u have to many unnecassary things coming off your letters. try to mirror the image with what u do one one side that u do on the other if u get that like with ur chips off the letters n all that. just clean it up with what u have coming off the bottom right of your letters