A356: Nice shit. The fill is good, if anything, i'd say get some crits at the intermediate thread. StayHye: The bars don't keep the same size, and it doesn't look like you intentionally did it. I don't know what those blue lines are but they definetely don't belong there. The U and N don't really keep the same style as the D R and E. Keep at it. Dek2: Like it a lot. Nice and clean with good structure. Only crit i have is overalll too many extensions. Ryser: It's not bad, got good flow. Bring the bar of the first R down a little. [Broken External Image]:http://img196.imageshack.us/img196/8512/p1000511a.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://img40.imageshack.us/img40/7448/p1000512r.jpg Simple. I think pink black and blue is a hot combo. crits please.
Hpir Id make the shadow on that a little bigger, and that e could use a bit of work, but otherwise it looks okay Graffyk your trying to draw in styles way beyond your skill level it looks like.. work a bit simpler View attachment 511033 Thinking of painting this soon, was thinking chrome fill white for highlights and black for the outline.. any crits?
You made a really common mistake here. You abandoned any attempt to provide solid letter structure for making cool backgrounds and colorways. You know you have a solid style when you can rock hollows with a single color and still look good.
yeah, i get colorhappy alot and just go all out with my sharpies until it's bright and colorful. but the second one is (almost) as simple as simple can be. I just added colors to it. Need i really go simpler on that one, or is there a way i can improve it?
Crits again please. Graffyk - The top one is better, but like Black Flag said, work on that letter structure. Fetusr - Not digging the T or the 3D. Kem - Looks alright, but could be better; I'm not sure how though.
Fury- keep at it man your on the write track basicly you just gotta keep practicing, throwies are something that develope over time and practice =]
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mad quick sketch [Broken External Image]:http://img10.imageshack.us/img10/3968/dscf2606q.jpg i fucked the C since it dont really flow wit the SE but any crits.
One evil- your headed in the right direction..but clean that shit up...a lot [Broken External Image]:http://img35.imageshack.us/img35/8528/1003092o.jpg I shouldn't have used purple...lack of color selection angers me