sec the lines dont keep the same width, work on that. That arrow that seems to be coming from the E behind the S, get rid of that. Slek you have creative fills and your flow is so neat, i like your style. Purple didn't really work with it, a bit too many dark colors next to each other keep it up.
No its not clean, and have lil to no flow........And by asking the question is it toy further more prove that you are.......Put it like this.....Can you truthfuly say that your style stands out from others.....Is it unique, Original(or some what)
I wasnt tryin to be unique or have a style that stands out, I still think its a decent simple that has flow to it
Then theirs your answer. Your sketch dosen't have good flow for one...........Its Decent...BUT could be better.
Viruz: On the first one, your D and E have completely different styles, but I'll assume that's because it's unfinished. Watch your thicknesses (for example, the bars on your H on the second pic are too skinny in comparison to your other letters). Also on the second pic, the extensions on your R are really out of place. The hole on the R is quite out of place as well. You're definitely onto something though. One Evil: I have no idea what that says, so go back to simples and practice until it's painfully boring and you fully understand the structures of the letters you choose to use. New To Graffiti thread has a lot of good reading for beginners like yourself. Slek: The only good thing I can see you're doing with your letters is that you are using consistent thicknesses. You are lacking significantly in the flow department though. Forget about coloring your sketches until you know that you're producing something worth using ink on. Cyto: The VAD portion of that looks pretty good minus the arrow on the V. Your i looks a little awkward because of the top and bottom extensions, so play around with that a little bit. Your M is definitely the oddball of the group and the arrow really isn't helping it out either. Break down the structure a little more and keep at it until it fits in with the other letters. Other than those things, it's a decent simple. Still workin' the simps, myself. Crits are appreciated View attachment 511420
Sec-Geah! I'm glad to see you trying new stuff. Work with it and try to keep it in proportion aswell as evenly spaced and it should be looking alot cleaner really soon. Viruz- I'm not at that level of sketching but it looks good to me. DropingLooking clean... really clean. Sonic Super clean pen simple. The arrow off the M looks weird to me. Lein- Keep working with that style and it looks like it will turn out original. Trying to make my T's Not as ugly. Crits please.
2k9 lein: like squint said its lookin original. squint: kleen, you should make the top line on your T end like the top of your S if that made any sense. heres a kinda old one, crits please
dope, maybe u could bring the style that u got goin at the bottom of the piece to the top, especially the top left of the 'K'
if one doesnt work http://i33.tinypic.com/n16juv.jpg http://tinypic.com/r/14mtn2f/4 i know red+blue bad shading crits please
just doing simple bars hey fellas first post been viewing the forums for a bit im just trying to work on my bars tell me what you think any crits are appreciated.
dude, shut the fuck up, seriously, you dont know what youre talking about. youre saying shit about being original yet almost every sketch you do is a bite (shitty ones at that). cyto, thats a dope straight letter, its not toy, dont listen to this kid. the only crit i can give you is if youre going to have an arrow on your "m", make the outside leg of it into one, dont just have one poking out like that.
Skwint that looks dope but don't do the squiggly line for your I and leave the loop shit out of your T. make it straight like the other ones and it will buuurn.