ur 3d is all kinds of fucked up. work with only 1 vanishing point for now till u get better.

here's a good example

 

so i stopped using guide lines and dont mind the bottom left of the s and fucked hollow part of the a, i know i messed that up but my main concern is the w.
its either non proportional, the sides curve in to the base or one leg is too skinny, or both.

sterc t's lookin like a j

 

s'ok, try bringing the 'a' higher, or making the legs taller, it looks awkward like it is now. oh yeah, like i said before, work on how you sketch, the lines look all fuzzy, n' shit. i'd suggest making your strokes longer.

 

s'ok, try bringing the 'a' higher, or making the legs taller, it looks awkward like it is now. oh yeah, like i said before, work on how you sketch, the lines look all fuzzy, n' shit. i'd suggest making your strokes longer.
your lines do look a little cleaner, though.

 

are you kidding? that's the style.

 

Snaw - Getting better fast. Just keep working on those bars.
Sterc - Trying to pull some MC Escher shit?
Viral - Second looks best.
Delae - Work on spacing.
Polar - Fix your R.

I was bored today so I decided to try making more intricate letters. Crits please!

 

I think he tried to make it a 3D style

 

not hatin' just wanted a reason to use this picture haha

 

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so i was told to put this in the toy bb section, i havent sketched in some time, just looking for some crits.

 

bump for crits

sterc, i like the 3d you have going on. I agree with whoever said it, but the T looks like a J



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you asked for simple.

 

i like it, fatten up the i maybe

 

Go similar man......Start off by using Keyboard letters

 

right off the bat, make the base of the 'k' bigger.
it looks too small compared to the rest of the letters.

 

thanks man, im going to do some simps for a while now

 

Bottom page bump:

http://www.bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/attachment.php?attachmentid=6997&d=1253827895
http://www.bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/attachment.php?attachmentid=6996&d=1253827877

 

cool, you'll get even more situated w/ letters by doing simps.

 

Hey I just recently started graffiti and I'm not that good but I wanna get good and I figured I should probably talk to some people that are good. Here's one of my newest drawings I did. I normally write 'Aski' but I wrote this for a person. But just wanted to get some crits and see what I could do better.



So please help me improve. I did some more ones recently but my computers scanner's being gay right now so I can't get 'em up lol.

 

Static- I like the C, but work on basic letter structure first.

Thoughts on this?
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dude, i know, and it came out like mediocre at best. thats why i said stick to simpler shit, starting with one vanishing point, then work up to that 3D whatever shit.

thats my 2 cents. kldnvalksdngl;amsgl;md;asgfmlkanzvd,ma