are those decos or those paint markers that come in packs?
that guy looks fresh, btw.

 

Deezy - Work on bars and check the new to graff thread.
Uppercut - Try rounding your letters, but your throws look good.

Does anybody give crits to get crits anymore? I mean god damn, come on people.

 

hgs that character is extra hard.

 

decos are paint markers...that also sometimes come in packs :/
you thinking of elmers?

shem - meh. less bends pls and ty and deformed bars. the drop shadow is incorrect on the bottom of the S and top and bottome of E. keep it up.

 

Decos, and thanks.

 

here i go
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cat-5 -thats awesome dude



first ever crits please

 

knemo - make the hole in your O bigger so it kinda matches the white space in the other letters.. and im not really feeling the K and M, N is nice though

 

thanks man, i like your "n"

 

^

 

Bump for a fourth time without crits.

Cat-5: I don't like how it gets bigger in the middle.
Knemo - Looks pretty clean but fatter in some areas.

 

you mean the the n and e? like dyNE?

 

mr collin sherlock!

 

The Y and the E, yeah

 

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Static- The thin line in the middle of the S kinda throws off the piece. Try and keep the separation between the two fill colors on each of the letters about the same throughout. The bubbles are nice. The 3d is off- check your vantage point

DYNE- Im liking your Y and N, looks like they'
re just lounging, I'd suggest getting the D and E that same kinda feel to them to make the over all piece flow all the way though. 3D, outline and bubbles on point

Knemo- That K looks really weird to me, again get that hole in the middle of the O bigger to get that bar consistency all the way through

Shem- I'm liking the style of the S,H and M but that E is missing what the other letters got- I think that the S,H and H all got a point where some of the bars get really thin except the E- all those bars are fat all around.

Half Gangsta- That is a tight ass monkey- for a girl I'm guessing?

STFU- I wont lie, at a glance that first piece looks really fresh, but when I sit and look at it i starts to loose its appeal- those are some mean throwies

Dee- Those colors hurt my eyes- new to graffiti thread

 

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Heres a cursive style that i made but drew. Bad picture but hopefully i can try to paint it this week and then actally go out and try it on a wall.

 

wom- pretty clean but i can tell you used a ruler and idk im not really a big fan of it i mena its a good start but that whole super tweeked 3d jsut
tweeked tomuch stand it up more and nnot as srteched

 

Just loose the handle bars and the arrow and you have a nice simp

 

ya that first peice was just a little somthin i did in school with pens n a highlighter. thanks man i prac my throws alot.