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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.

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  1. RADAWG

    RADAWG Senior Member

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    Dont really practice anything but throws and tags, just starting to get into simples/straight an shit
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    Knar- Your shits lookin solid to me, nice simples
     
  2. Schizz

    Schizz Member

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  3. Epoc

    Epoc Senior Member

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    ^^^ ahahah

    fuck yesh. if i used taz as a throw I'd handstyle "dont" before it and "me bro" after.

    mid one has potential ther others suk.
     
  4. Schizz

    Schizz Member

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    Don't mean to play the dumb shit but you've lost me there, haha. Any sugestions on how to fix/improve it? Or am I starting again... Again
     
  5. KidReny!

    KidReny! Senior Member

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    id try to go simple
     
  6. Schizz

    Schizz Member

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  7. RADAWG

    RADAWG Senior Member

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    The first one is heading in the right direction,keep working with that. All the other ones suck except the last one but its obvious you didn't do that one

    Im also reallllybored.

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  8. cocacola

    cocacola Senior Member

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  9. Schizz

    Schizz Member

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    I did actually, I just spent more than 5 minutes on it... Thanks anyway.
     
  10. Graffyk

    Graffyk Senior Member

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    taz, the first one is good. nice simple letters with a nice shine efffect. Just lose that red stuff at the top.

    the rest needs some work. The bars arent consistent width and some the letters are too far apart. The exodus at the bottom is pretty good. I would just say bring the top part of the S up. it doesnt really match with the rest.

    cocacola that shit is fresh. I dont see anything wrong with them
     
  11. EST2007

    EST2007 Elite Member

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    dude u got arrows coming outta nowhere. arrows should be used as extensions of letters to balance out a piece
     
  12. BigBlueViolence

    BigBlueViolence Elite Member

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    That 1line hand is pretty weak, Zarb.
    you should bring the leg around the other way so it doesn't look like a retarded star.

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  13. Schizz

    Schizz Member

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    Cheers bloke.

    - cokacola your characters are great but the other dude is right, they arows look like kind of an after thought.

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    Simpley..simple ..simpleton...
     
  14. -Empty-Can-

    -Empty-Can- Elite Member

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    Bump for crits.

    Taz- THe first one is ok but i don't really like the details. THe rest are arent very good but i like the purple one. the last two you posted are pretty good.

    cocacola - those are nice. the characters are pretty good
     
  15. STFUPPERCUT

    STFUPPERCUT Senior Member

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  16. cocacola

    cocacola Senior Member

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    actually the arrows. i thought up of makin them come off the outline instead of the letters cus idk where to put them on the letters
     
  17. EST2007

    EST2007 Elite Member

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    if you don't know where to put them, then don't use them. misuse of arrows and extensions can/will make a decent piece lame
     
  18. remos

    remos Senior Member

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    first sketch in a while crits are welcome
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  19. -Empty-Can-

    -Empty-Can- Elite Member

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    Its a small pic kinda hard to say anything
     
  20. remos

    remos Senior Member

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    i know my phone takes small pics i cant get it bigger