Dont really practice anything but throws and tags, just starting to get into simples/straight an shit Knar- Your shits lookin solid to me, nice simples
Shell man, that reminds me of the Metallica logo hehe. Radawg, I'm not feelin' the bulges on the R and the A, maybe it's just personal prefrence, I don't know. Been re-thinking my throw, what do you guys think of these? View attachment 512837 View attachment 512838 View attachment 512839
^^^ ahahah fuck yesh. if i used taz as a throw I'd handstyle "dont" before it and "me bro" after. mid one has potential ther others suk.
Don't mean to play the dumb shit but you've lost me there, haha. Any sugestions on how to fix/improve it? Or am I starting again... Again
View attachment 512864 View attachment 512865 View attachment 512866 View attachment 512867 View attachment 512868 I'm bored shitless here if you can't tell...
The first one is heading in the right direction,keep working with that. All the other ones suck except the last one but its obvious you didn't do that one Im also reallllybored.
taz, the first one is good. nice simple letters with a nice shine efffect. Just lose that red stuff at the top. the rest needs some work. The bars arent consistent width and some the letters are too far apart. The exodus at the bottom is pretty good. I would just say bring the top part of the S up. it doesnt really match with the rest. cocacola that shit is fresh. I dont see anything wrong with them
dude u got arrows coming outta nowhere. arrows should be used as extensions of letters to balance out a piece
That 1line hand is pretty weak, Zarb. you should bring the leg around the other way so it doesn't look like a retarded star.
Cheers bloke. - cokacola your characters are great but the other dude is right, they arows look like kind of an after thought. View attachment 512886 Simpley..simple ..simpleton...
Bump for crits. Taz- THe first one is ok but i don't really like the details. THe rest are arent very good but i like the purple one. the last two you posted are pretty good. cocacola - those are nice. the characters are pretty good
Bump. 3rd one down was the result of a night with a bag of mushies. ill get a better pic when i got a good camera.
actually the arrows. i thought up of makin them come off the outline instead of the letters cus idk where to put them on the letters
if you don't know where to put them, then don't use them. misuse of arrows and extensions can/will make a decent piece lame