armen the first one, it would be better if you brought up the right part of the V the second one is nice, i like the fill. The third one is good too, but the E is really messed up. sone- the first and last one are definetely my faves. Keep it up [Broken External Image]:http://img190.imageshack.us/img190/3377/p1000532k.jpg
sone- u showin ur whole black book bro haa, yo tight work there all good man. gaff- work on the letters a little bit bro im not to sure what it said but just practice up and ull get there budd.
Word, I started on some ish last night, few hands and throws, no full simps yet. Expect it in a day or two, 'cause it's Turkey Day today and I must celebrate.
sate i love that first one. the second looks like weird because i dont really like how the e and s like flail out in both directions. crits appreciated, first time picking up a marker or anything in a while first one is a bitten idea..whatever last one is just a sketch, and the s is fucked up so whatever fuck the last one
snaw - make your bars the same width - if you find it hard tape 2 pencils together or something. good to see your doing simples tho sate - i think your shit is fucking fire especially the green splatter one - the grey shades are so subtle but are insane and bring the whole piece together for me. i cant really fault you at all except for the fact that i personally dont like the pointed ends to the S and E but thats my opinion. loving the splatters so much. start considering new letter forms, you've got those ones down man. try some new styles StayHyE - i feel your letters and addons are a little angular, maybe soften up some of the points. the 3D has an inconsisted vanishing point too. the colours/fills and highlights are pretty cool tho man and i respect that you're trying new stuff. try to move your hand quicker when sketching your letters SCAPE - your letter forms are way to angular and curved in boring and similar ways. try to broaden the variety of angles which you use for bars in your letters and dont use as many pointed joins to connect the lines of your bars up - round them off occasionally sone - fucking loving your throwies and the silver and orange piece. not really feeling the thicker pen pieces though. ryfle - your shit is sick i can't fault it Dale - loving the cracks and letterforms. the only thing which i could possibly fault is too many pointed meetings of lines. maybe smooth a few out or add some subtle additions like sate's shit ALL MY CRITS ARE MY OWN OPINION AND IM NO PRO SO TAKE THEM HOW YOU WANT YOU CAN TAKE OR LEAVE MY ADVICE - ITS JUST MY OPINION, WHICH MEANS IT DOESN'T MEAN IM RIGHT now, please crit my shit!:
to be honest i really enjoy your letters but that shit doesn't fly around here. you gotta work on sizing and keeping everything equally important. and your M is mad skinny.
satra the t fucking burnsss and the s is nice too. overall i think its awesome lookin and stuuuffff but the handie im not a fan of
yo satra it's not great, certainly not as good as suparjafar makes it out to be but it's a start i do like the 3d though
satra, what you painting?) [Broken External Image]:http://s41.radikal.ru/i093/0910/36/d6dd5d643ff0.jpg
soak: good shit keep at it. one thing i would suggest is that in that penciled one, altho real ambitious and good, i wouldnt make 3 of the arrows point one way and one point the opposite. imo it looks goofy that way.
soak,chill with all the extentions perhaps? other then that your letter structures pretty ecent,keep at it holmes.
Here's some bs I did the other night, was looking for some crits on the handy on the right: like a rainbow in the dark. View attachment 517324