This thread is starting to become an annoyance.

 

Any crits would be really helpfull
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Less talking more pictures!

 

eliminate those black bubbles it looks like those dog paw prints girls do on there bookbags..the 3d is really skinny for some reason and looks like shit in white color it in black,take off that curve u put on that I,fix the bottom of the s..aktag,im really fealing the simplicity

 

this is what i'm talking about. dope dope dope.

edit: on second thought, the K could use some work, but your use of critique is good.

 

I'm new here, so I figured I'd start in the Toy thread. I'm getting sick of the PG bullshit, so...

wasn't really serious with the throw-up
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the R is out of place, i know. and the character is suck.

The top one is my latest, hopefully will have some more up soon.

AKTAG, try working with basic, straight bars. This will help eliminate some of the awkward sway in your letters, especially your Ks

SIKO, I'd say the same for you. Build structure using those basic bars and whatnot.

 

^ lovin the style, wanna exchange? ^

 

Pretty nifty man and great sketch. Snatch is a sick flick. I suggest making the little K bar a bit bigger.

 

Akor your style (especially the R) reminds me of a simple version of Alts.
Keep with it I can see your shit going places.

But that arrow on the A looks like shit IMO, and the second K's top right bar should be more noticeable

 

Aight, thanks for the feedback.
Promise I'm not biting ALTS. He's an influence, but biting aint my thing.
And I can see where your coming from for sure. I'll work on the K and A too, for sure.

And MAWKS, I'm down. What do you write?

 

mawks hahaha or just mawk

 

fuckkk, i was hoping it was something else. I hate W's with a fiery passion.
Itll be up in a bit.

 

I'd like it a lot more if there wasn't an arrow in the A.

 

I was just trying to figure out a new way to do the A connection, and just did it fucking around. But I won't anymore, haha

 

Exchange for Mawks

Not that good, hate the K,
W threw off the flow really bad.
A sucks.
M, isn't too bad, i hope.
I can't sleep, and ill really regret this in the morning.
I'll do a better one tomorrow, hopefully

 

I've been working on developing a cleaner style, crits whould be cool

 

Kew- I don't feel that W