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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.

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  1. TrandomnesstwO

    TrandomnesstwO Senior Member

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    No,my post is not a duplicate of the post I have posted in the last 5 minutes.Goddamn why cant it be just to drag the picture over with...complications.
     
  2. kew1

    kew1 Senior Member

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  3. suparjafar

    suparjafar Senior Member

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    work on your handie, and do simples for now. also the throw e is decent.

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    havent done a simple in a while, tried a roes. i need ideas for o's, it just looks like a blob.
     
  4. n8galicia

    n8galicia Senior Member

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    I think your E and S could use a little restructuring, but for the O idk put a D shaped fill I guess

    Edit: Here's mine. I really don't know how much simple I can go, because block letters are pretty much the best way I can blow out an S lol. but just playin with letters

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  5. KaSo

    KaSo Member

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    New to the site

    whats up Writers, I'm new to the site. well just wanted to post some stuff. i started learning when i was14 i stopped at 16 and now im just trying to get back into it. one is "TRUST" and the other is a pencil sketch of a writer..
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  6. RanO

    RanO Member

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    You need shadows in your first one. With shadows it will be much better!
     
  7. KaSo

    KaSo Member

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    Thanks I'll work on that in the next one.
     
  8. TheToy

    TheToy Elite Member

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    That pencil sketch is dope.
     
  9. Thrice

    Thrice Elite Member

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    Kaso- lose the arrows and extensions, and scrap the 3D look. Just go basic letters, keyboard letters. Learn letter structure and make bends in you bars before anything else.

    SEN- Don't get too funky with block letters, make keyboard letters as well, go way basic, and make sure all proportions are right and the letters are clean.

    Messin' around, need to rotate my A and H and shouldn't have bent the first bar of the A that much, but w/e im sorta content.

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    Kinda copped someone's fill and heavy influence, but w/e.
     
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  10. KaSo

    KaSo Member

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    The Toy- Thanks.
    Thrice- ok I'll remeber that. most likely I'll drop some new shit in the bbook and post it. Thanks for the feedback.
     
  11. ironcrack

    ironcrack Senior Member

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    thrice.. bend the a the other direction to match the m
    word to everything
     
  12. KaSo

    KaSo Member

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    Alright.. give it to me straight!:D
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    i know i phucked up on the O and the K is garbage.
     
  13. xSonnyTx

    xSonnyTx Senior Member

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    Your combination of sharp corners and rounded edges (especially on the S) is pretty wack.

    Go simple. Lose the add-ons like arrows and little chips and shit. Write straight letters, even if you think its boring. It might not have flair but its better to have simple stuff now, and sick stuff down the road than to keep pumping out toy pieces
     
  14. Thrice

    Thrice Elite Member

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    As i said before, lose extensions and arrows. Go with basic letters, and utilize bars, don't try to add eddgy shit to the letters, always looks bad.
     
  15. n8galicia

    n8galicia Senior Member

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    looks bitten from mr. wiggles?
     
  16. KaSo

    KaSo Member

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    Sonny-Thats wasup man, yeah i started with the regular font with the bars, and went from there. that was the first time i've used that starting point. aiight, preciate the feedback. Dueces

    Thrice- i know i know.. i gotta break the habit

    Kose2- nah brah, not from wigglez. ... well shit now that i look at the K, i do see it too. damn, that wasnt my intentions. i didnt even realize it.

    i preciate all your feedback.
     
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  17. n8galicia

    n8galicia Senior Member

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    aight. In the start, I went to Mr. Wiggles for inspiration but now I kinda think his stuff is wack
     
  18. suparjafar

    suparjafar Senior Member

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    my only crits are everyone on the page except ahem go simple.

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    hoping this starts a new page...
     
  19. Boris The Blade

    Boris The Blade Member

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    your R looks much too much like a P, dont make the R so round on the end. I know thats the only way itll flow, but it just looks awkward. Try working onthat. The E looks mad generic, and the squiggle on the S is kinda weird. For a simple, its not bad; for a throwie, you need to throw more style into it.
     
  20. 8thworldwonder

    8thworldwonder New Member

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    roes pretty freshhhh keep it up n probably take the squiggle out of the s