No,my post is not a duplicate of the post I have posted in the last 5 minutes.Goddamn why cant it be just to drag the picture over with...complications.
work on your handie, and do simples for now. also the throw e is decent. View attachment 529962 havent done a simple in a while, tried a roes. i need ideas for o's, it just looks like a blob.
I think your E and S could use a little restructuring, but for the O idk put a D shaped fill I guess Edit: Here's mine. I really don't know how much simple I can go, because block letters are pretty much the best way I can blow out an S lol. but just playin with letters View attachment 529963
New to the site whats up Writers, I'm new to the site. well just wanted to post some stuff. i started learning when i was14 i stopped at 16 and now im just trying to get back into it. one is "TRUST" and the other is a pencil sketch of a writer..
Kaso- lose the arrows and extensions, and scrap the 3D look. Just go basic letters, keyboard letters. Learn letter structure and make bends in you bars before anything else. SEN- Don't get too funky with block letters, make keyboard letters as well, go way basic, and make sure all proportions are right and the letters are clean. Messin' around, need to rotate my A and H and shouldn't have bent the first bar of the A that much, but w/e im sorta content. Kinda copped someone's fill and heavy influence, but w/e.
The Toy- Thanks. Thrice- ok I'll remeber that. most likely I'll drop some new shit in the bbook and post it. Thanks for the feedback.
Your combination of sharp corners and rounded edges (especially on the S) is pretty wack. Go simple. Lose the add-ons like arrows and little chips and shit. Write straight letters, even if you think its boring. It might not have flair but its better to have simple stuff now, and sick stuff down the road than to keep pumping out toy pieces
As i said before, lose extensions and arrows. Go with basic letters, and utilize bars, don't try to add eddgy shit to the letters, always looks bad.
Sonny-Thats wasup man, yeah i started with the regular font with the bars, and went from there. that was the first time i've used that starting point. aiight, preciate the feedback. Dueces Thrice- i know i know.. i gotta break the habit Kose2- nah brah, not from wigglez. ... well shit now that i look at the K, i do see it too. damn, that wasnt my intentions. i didnt even realize it. i preciate all your feedback.
my only crits are everyone on the page except ahem go simple. View attachment 530213 hoping this starts a new page...
your R looks much too much like a P, dont make the R so round on the end. I know thats the only way itll flow, but it just looks awkward. Try working onthat. The E looks mad generic, and the squiggle on the S is kinda weird. For a simple, its not bad; for a throwie, you need to throw more style into it.