^ what he said, and lose the addons/extensions.

 

Talkin about my sketch?

 

i know bubble style is always considered pretty toy, but i did one anyway for fun.

 

well, that "bubble style" you speak of are usually throwups. no theyre not considered toy at all when done right so yeah work on make all your letters the same size and only work on letters no fills or anything.

roes throw pen

 

so you think my J should be smaller? i thought it looked good like that. ill work on it though.

 

some kind of joke- I don't like it at all. Your letters need more structure.

roes- I'm not feelin the E or R. try and make the lower extension on the R connect to the rest of it

 

not sure what you mean

 

it might just be me, but making lower leg of the R gaplessly connect to the rest of the letter, looks better

 

Your R needs lots of work. And that S doesn't look like it fits.

 

what kind of structure do i need?
i dont understand really what you mean...

 

crus man that piece is good. but you need to give it life. try fucking around with your fills.
and work on your hand style. you could be the dopest bomber and king of the peices and still be a joke if you got a wack hand

 

some shit i did during school
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crus man that piece is good. but you need to give it life. try fucking around with your fills.
and work on your hand style. you could be the dopest bomber and king of the peices and still be a joke if you got a wack hand

 

those phillys look good but im seein beke in that last one, watch your structure there

 

ahem- dont connect the top of your E to the middle
skoj?- try simpler bubble letters
cocacola- not feeling this one. it almost looks like craes
sinkalla- same what super said. ALmost looks like a B

simple piece i did
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crits?

 

Fix your S so its more Key board and make your O just plain n round.

 

I don't like your E