can i get a real crit on this... i gave 6 if you want crits then give them out too... unless you're real toy
your bars look kinda sketchy and the areas around some corners like the top right part of ur e and top left part of ur z have weird lumps...fix those. the middle bar on the Z is to thin and the two middle bars on the M are weird....cant crit that cus i suck at M's
i'll give a few more crits: HEIR - I really like the overall flow of the piece - especially in the top of the I - there really nice curves and angles - its tight right there. What i would say is that the bottom left bar of the H seems to bend inward awkwardly? consider a symmetrical extension to you R to balance the sketch out maybe? also not feeling the bottom half of your R - i think you should split the bars apart at the bottom
i mean the right, zig-zagged bar of the R tucks under the straighter left foot of the R - i feel that if should kick out to the right a bit more so its less like a B (i know it doesnt look anything like a B but just for the sake of the R having more flow) (in my opinion)
You really seem to struggle with the H alot , you keep bending its legs strangely , work on that,i like top of r too, referring to your last post ive to say that youve definately improved,on the one hand i feel the top of your r, but on on the other hand its a bit too curvy n smooth compared to the other letters, all the other bar endings extensions n stuff are way more sharp angle shaped...alos id open up the e a lil more cuz it looks squeezed give it room to breath, bottom middle e i is wired too, lots of little stuff goin on, not really contributing to the overall appearance, last but not least you should work on your i , its a bit too big n in your recent posts it looks like t. but still good job though
now in my professional expertise, what you all need to do is take a break and enjoy some french toast sticks
trying a whole bunch of different things but with the similiar styles/conections View attachment 535606 improving?
Ur starting to get it, Now try and make it more simple first. Than start playing with your bars. I like it.
Weakfingers-That would make a sick burner, you really should paint that Rasta- The GEEK name is kinda whack, maybe like REEK? that could be alota good balance like backwards R and shit in a piece? Plus it would give more to work with
Musk [Broken External Image]:http://img502.imageshack.us/img502/9048/musk3.jpg lol this thing says Rebecka. [Broken External Image]:http://img294.imageshack.us/img294/3307/beccai.jpg Rezi [Broken External Image]:http://img263.imageshack.us/img263/1535/rezi2.jpg