KEW-you should work a getting your letters structed better before trying those hook ups. they look out of place and im really not feeling those characters in it.. IMO

but keep sketching letters you got a basic idea of what to do

 

kew - dumb it down a lil, you're getting too ahead of yourself
roes - not bad, the r looks kinda awkward tho

now who wants to exchange??

 

damn mawks those are heat, nice bars on the first, diggin the two letter throws reall nice half to say my favorite are the green one and the blue one sick

 

im fealing that mawk
kew im fealin that but the zebra takes away from it
roes ur handstyle is improving keep playing with that
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^thats whati was tellin him it makes it not look very mature just my opinion though

 

tofe lol my girl drew all them characters

 

Woah. nice. That would be a good piece on the wall.

 

tofe puttin in that practice... lookin nice

cyto i like that letter structure but the S is a little thin and the left of the P is a little thick... a real 3d would set that shit off and give u some room for error if u know what i mean, im not sure what that grey is doin it almost looks like a 3d but its off in a lot of places

 

meka is that yours?

 

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yea unfortunately.

 

fuck unfortunately lol i think that shit is nice... between the 2 id vote for u meka.... nice handy (spare this criminal, i like it) ... freshness

 

Better get your girlfriend her own blackbook.

Is that the Zebra from the Zebra Stripes gum? Or whatever the eff it is...

 

ah thank ya sir

 

yeah mek, i'm surprised
i thought you sucked a whole lot more than that xD

 

thanks prick!

 

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crits, not giving any since new page.

 

nice.... just match that 3d all the way around man... the 3d off the back of ur F is out of place... post it when ur done ill give u a better crit