geek i think one of the bars on the k should go up more and look like the top of the G and the Es juss so it will flow more but that shit still is tihgt man
not a blackbook but i use this shit as my blackbook so fuck yall haha crits [Broken External Image]:http://img710.imageshack.us/img710/7757/secoesnk.png crits? GEEK.. feelin it for sure, work on your tag more so now.
Geek - Looks sick but you gotta change up the second E to not make it look the same. Safer - The first looks like it says SPEAR. Just change the A and it'll look good
Woony that looks alot like the one that got you suspended work on your L and dont put so much backwards diagonal bar at the bottom. The I and the Z are pretty good but im not feeling the E either.
some shit i did.. [Broken External Image]:http://img704.imageshack.us/img704/9724/homedrawinggreenie.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://img199.imageshack.us/img199/5918/hometree.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://img194.imageshack.us/img194/1846/homedrippy.jpg
home, your stuff is nice, youve a generall understanding of your letters, able to keep style through pieces, coloring , lights, 3d overall very well, up to intermediateid say . in the first piece, h looks like k at first sight, uuhhm letters all consist of quite thick bars, only h goes extremly thin at one point, and well one could say uve extensions comin out of nowhere ...still i like it. 2nd pice mmh well nothing special, lose the extension of the h, lower its middle bar n work it all over again. 3rd piece, h nicely set off, forgot to thickn the outline top extension, i dont like how you connect o m ,id rather connect em all or none, o is too big..might be because of your very low m, but u definately got to define it more, kinda like little arrow bottom h, id do kinda same with the e, all for the harmony...def. has potential...
i hate my P but my A's are getting a lil better, i also changed my s [Broken External Image]:http://img4.imageshack.us/img4/9020/006gez.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://img109.imageshack.us/img109/2228/007su.jpg
^ It's simple, but good. Also, don't draw throwies attached to the bottom; get used to drawing the whole letter.
Come on, EVERYBODY knows that the good throws have Godlike powers and can float at will, thus not being attached to any form of ground and they can do whatever the fuck they want!
@ woony. IMO either lose or work on the character it doesn't really go with the letters One evil what does it say bro?