rough draft for school project. [Broken External Image]:http://img444.imageshack.us/img444/2654/getattachmentpergatory.jpg says pergatory
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re i think it looks clean man... but i think you used to many arrows to accentuate your letter structure... try substituting some of the arrows for something a little more original to your kinda taste...like a flourish or spiral etc... (experiment using an overlay of tracing paper) and possibly incorperate some line breaks and cracks in the letter itself
I don't understand why it keeps saying a moderator has to approve my posts... Crust, bent like the bottom? Or slanted at the top? Sorry it took so long. I don't know why I can't post pictures. Ehh, probably cause I spammed my Troll picture.
yeah i'm just trying to fill in the negative space. i havent really experimented much with extensions so it's hard for me to come up with new ideas for them. good idea with the tracing paper. i never thought of doing that. good looks man.
rewt-i like the top u should roll that some where. kan- the top one is decent not diggin the other two
i would bust out the same bar that is on the bottom half of the S over unto the R to make it all more simetrical. my .02 peace
NO the R is the worst letter for sure, that's why I was looking at it. whatever, my .02 but I think simetry might help the word. the S is decent for sure. a bigger E might help too.
sevr- i hate the whole thing especially that r,fix the left side of the v and that s is too fat..I hate your name too,you do know there is already someone with the name sever,right? atesk - your always pulling out some dope shit,love the whole thing just wish you kept the arrows to a minimum,more than 5 is already too much imo...but its dope and im looking foward to see what you will do with the 3d on that :] kans - the first one is on point just fix that k and make the n less fat rewt - dope,black letters white 3d and black forcefield,rock it on a wall! [Broken External Image]:http://i456.photobucket.com/albums/qq287/flippinchickens/DSCN3185.jpg ^ a freestyle,messy as fuck and a lot of proportions are wrong,like the f and e have to go lower and im going to make a fatter t like the f and im going to whip up a new one soon cuz i kinda like how it came out despite all the flaws it has [Broken External Image]:http://i456.photobucket.com/albums/qq287/flippinchickens/DSCN3186.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://i456.photobucket.com/albums/qq287/flippinchickens/DSCN3184.jpg ^ really hate how my t came out [Broken External Image]:http://i456.photobucket.com/albums/qq287/flippinchickens/DSCN3189.jpg ^ another pen freestyle
tofe-u gotta lose the swirly t and that akward extension on the f thats goin up on the 4th on.iv said this before so try to improve from the crits or people are ust gonna stop givin em....and YES I KNOW theres already a sever
re in progress... tofe i think it would look better since your doing simples to make your letters of an equal width
try droppin that background tealish color so the letters are more visible ... you notice how that lip on the l over laps to much on the u taking away from it try forming your letters at different angles so when you out the next letter in the work it doesnt overlap to much and hide a major portion of the letter...
jwhite-ur letters are slightly gettin bigger as u read it...when i do a style with the letters overlaping like that make a rectangle and make the letters fit inside on it and i have every letter touch the top and the bottom of it so u know there the same size