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my black was dying. you can't see the top of the boarder bc of my scanner :/

 

i like the letters but that character is hurtin

 

he is just a quick something to fill in the space.

 

is your crew named Brute?

 

no that's my boy. we go painting all the time. it was in his book.

 

crits?
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No... just no..
sorry man

 

try again. use bars this time. and dont add those random super skinny bars. and use letters like this VISE

 

Bump.
Anyone remember this.

 

LOL, i remember that shitty toss on that Keg bellied bitch, yeah.
on another note,
help a ***** out, huh?
i know the hole in the Q is to small i fixed that earlier btw.
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hahahaha I REMEMBER BOME!

 

shes rockin the beer gut.

 

lol

man 3 months writing and thats his best! WOW...thats not very good. im sorry. and im in class , i was scrolling , i didnt want to see that gut , nor did anybody else in my class....EWW!

but i think the best one he did was on that girl with the gut though HA!

 

u mean along these lines then ehh?(if so do u take and add in things now?)
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bumping for crits hopefully

 

bottom page bump

 

vise-dont add anything till e get those simples down..try new style with those letter though(overlap them or tilt every letter a different way)make all ur bars the same thickness and lose the bars that are at the ends of all those letters

one evil-same thing^

sice-lose that extension that bends up at the end of the bottom leg on the e

 

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Slice- decide whether of not to over lap- the S overlaps the I and the I a little the C then absolutely no overlap on the E. Also the 3D is off in many places throughout the piece.

One Evil- straight letters for a while

Vice- thats an ok straight letter but the S bar is off- try doing that fast like 50 times.

Black- the top of the S and E are fresh but id work with the bottom of those letters a little bit.

 

i agree with shells crits

shell- youre going towards a style that can look mad dope when its painted, but its hard to tell what it would end up like if you did it just from that sketch. the one obvious thing i see wrong with it is the bottom of the S and how the dark area doesnt match up the outside outline. All i really gotta say is that youre dealing with a steez that has a very fine line between mad wack and mad fresh. I'd have to see more of em to make a final decision on which one yours is.

exchange for evow. ran out of black so i outlined the rest in red. ignore the straight letter at the bottom and the hadnstyles, Ive been on a long break and just wanna know if the piece in the middle is still up to par, ill fix the rest later.

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