are you tryin to say my first letter looks like a k?...the piece is "onek"

....if soo i feel so wack its not funny [/b][/quote]
i mean last letter....i like the last letter...which is a K....

 

i mean last letter....i like the last letter...which is a K.... [/b][/quote]

im goin do somert for later
yeee.

 

hi im new here! :huh:
i made sum work until now...








could u please comment this.
"constructive criticism pls" <_<

 

yeah, thats good work, for a toy
jus work on your letters a bit more
everythin good

 

yo cruicible..you need to work on your letter structure..like everybody always says..go back to block letters and progress a little more slower for your style

in that piece your letters look like they are all different sizes and weights

and most important..
work on your handstyle some more

 

is your name half bit from geez :angry:

 

uh no..ive had this name since tony hawk pro skater 3 came out..people think i bit it from young jeezy..i hate this shit..i had this name way before he came out

any way
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i f'ed up the colors...maybe just f'ed up in general but constructive crits please

 

(for a friend)



(in chronological order)

 

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sepha i like ur pieces!
thanks for the comments!
for interrest when is considerd a writer not a toy if u get me, exp ??

im workin alot in writin
il post my work ofetn from now one here tnx alot and respect 4 all

 

that guitar could be better
like drawin an ibanez sg
tha would look sweet

Molotow

 

nah their painties they suck ass, you can tell they are kinda dryed out, ya i see wat you mean by the other holes are just dots, i guess i should keep that in mind next time thanks, and i guess this piece is a matter of preferance, cuz i dont like it but Gerk does, and you dont like it but, Vorce doese, so what ever, i lost the battle to SENE any way because of all the stupid toys, they voted for him cuz his shit is so "funny" it just sucks big balls, but what ever.

 

havik now e-terror lost to sene too and i think he found out that he bit.
the kids got nice colouring though

 

bump dis one its tight

 

hahaha this kid put his myspace in his sig...hope you get arrested [/b][/quote]


Wow. i hope this kid DIES.

Myspace? wtf?

 

yo jeez if youve been writin that name since tony hawks pro skater 3....you need to quit. now.

 

fuckin my scanner kills all the shading..this sketch has alot alot of detail in it..and the scanner killed it all.

before



afer

 

yeh the top ones sick. s and e need work in the lower one i reckon tho. s should be the same heigh as the rest and the e is kinda skinny...

 

NO..you misunderstood

ive been writing for 2 WEEKS...ive had that nickname since tonyhawk pro skater 3

2 totally different things..back when i was into games i used the nickname Jeezy..and ive been using it to write for 2 weeks