that throw isnt bad but on the piece you need to try and keep all your bars the same width and it'd probably come out looking better, also try not to have the U overlap the bottom of the L so much, and you should round the R because most of your bars are curved so it'd just flow better. And dont worry about arrows and extensions, they're over rated anyways. I know it sounds like im being hard on you but im just tryng to help out
Here's a couple simples I just filled in. I've got a couple more to color in. Just wanted to post something for now.
filur-why is the hole so small on the R? fix that NOW!! Gatsoi-if that says grim...well i just can hardly read it....go for a more clean look
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TOFE- stick to simple, no extension peices , I mean really everytime you try and add flare to your shit it fails miserably. All your stuff is awkward and not pleasant to look at. Just work on those letters man. MEko- awesome, TOFE needs to get influenced from the work you've been putting out, your stuff is so legit. and here's something that's unfinished.. can't figure out what I want to do with the R and what to use as a fill.
I know its sloppy but I was sketching it just quick to get the idea down... View attachment 574443 crits?
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new simp first one i really liked.. first two letters r meko bites, the last two r from deres. [Broken External Image]:http://img43.imageshack.us/img43/7520/003aez.jpg handy progress.. [Broken External Image]:http://img706.imageshack.us/img706/9068/004fiq.jpg
kers i dont like the extension off the top of that S... and biting when u know ur biting isnt a good idea, at least not full letters, u can take an idea for parts of each letter and then tweak them to make them ur own but dont directly steal whole letters i know my T looks like a G and it needs more to it... and the overall structure sucks but i did this pretty quick, coulda been worse... the picture came out like shit cuz i had to use a webcam :-/ its much more vibrant to the naked eye