Skry... the last one is tight, only thing is that R is starting to look like a B, the rest are lacking. the first one the k and r need work... I hardly could tell it was an r or k, same thing with the 3rd one. I just don't like them. hope this helped a little.

 

I agree with Vini

Im not feelin my K but other than that..a crit?
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Cool concept slek, i think you should lose some of the connections and weird lines

 

Slek I love your colors and your whole background schemes. I feel that this is a good concept but after the SL it kinda gets iffy.

 

Been a wile so thort I'd put a few up,



Last one is same pic as in 'tot characters' but diff angle

 

Slek: real nice, color scheme and background are great. i agree with vini some of the lines need to be dropped. i personally like the connection of the L and E. keep your bars the same width.

Awe: not feeling the first one, the bubbles are too scattered, and the letters need better structure and flow. i like the idea of the second one though

 

slek - horrible letters but great coloring! do simple letters and use the same effort used in the coloring of that peice and you could have some nice stuff!

ok here's something I started last night at like 2 and have since been fucking around with it and I still am. Let me know whatchu think, it's a tad bit simpler than what I've been doing

 

That S is busted, make it a little more rounded?

 

grim- try makin ur g flow into ur r more
awe- like the character but not so much the lettering work on simps
slek- sweet coloring and concept but some of the connections are too much (the line connecting the middle of the l and the e)


crits?

 

oh forgot to mention that all the letters there are partially bitten

 

everything shay said
heres a piece i did for an exchange: werm
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and this is a piece on paint...dont like the m
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Working on bar widths.
Some things I like about certain ones, other shit I just hate. I dunno.
Crits?

 

^nice stuff, you got good letter structure, i think your 3rd sketch is the best

 

Thanks.

I didn't realize I posted the same picture twice. This one was supposed to be in there somewhere.

 

colored it, not good lighting so it's inverted lol

 

Nice shit Atmos... good letters.

 

A more experienced writer may say im wrong but I think this one is phat as hell!

 

it IS phat

hahaha