Yeah man, tis wer am from, we shoulda won by 6! an I have been tryna make em a little different by dropping the a off to the left middle, but I'll go with caps next time around an see wer that takes me, cheers. Wer bouts in n Ireland u from?

 

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Crits?

Old as fuck sketch.

It reads bounce by the way.

 

there comes a time when people learn arrows arent everything

 

anti - it looks like one of those ink blotches that the psychiatrist will ask you "and what does this remind you of" Lose the arrows, give your letters some structure (lose all those connections)

Looking at the letters it seems like they might have some style if you drew them out using bars instead of melted wax. Can we maybe see those letters drawn out individually? or at least simple like?

awe - for colors maybe a yellow/yellow fill, or a lighter orange/yellow. I like the piercings on the W. I dont like how you made the hole on the e look like a j, you should have made the hole in the a an actual hole if you are gonna make the e an actual hole

Chad - Nice work, i like the D the most

Stigma - the Jason is way better, I dont like the S though, its too square. You have a rounded J and O (even your A and N are slightly round), and your 3D is off on the N

 

some rank peaces

 

U a Rangers man RES4?

Dangeri - Im a liverpool fan too. I like the idea of your piece, i'd concentrate more on the individual letters because i like the whole broken/cracked idea and the 3d looks good, so i'd just concentrate on making the letters right, just my opinon though.

 

U a Rangers man RES4?

Dangeri - Im a liverpool fan too. I like the idea of your piece, i'd concentrate more on the individual letters because i like the whole broken/cracked idea and the 3d looks good, so i'd just concentrate on making the letters right, just my opinon though.

 

Can i get crits on my letters on these? I dont need crits on my outlines or my colours because I know I fucked up on those.



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Willis Go simple and try making your bars less boxy.

Crittssss?

 

Rhek, i like your piece, maybe make the E thinker and make the top bar on the K a little bigger

 

The R is hot. Make the part that connects the two downward lines in the H skinny to match the skinny line in the R. The E just looks out of place and bad. It needs to be much thicker except you could make the middle straight left to right skinny to keep the theme going. The k looks good except for the line that is like / Make that one thicker and leave the rest the same.

I know thats a lot of crits but I do like it.

 

Thanks guys.

 

How's this?

 

you draw really slow. and the E is entirely too skinny. and i dont really like your R. but thats just me

 

Willis, almost every letter needs work bud. Bar thickness is all over the place
Lose the extension on the w and just concentrate on making your letter bars the same width. Should even drop the 3d to be honest unitl you sort your structure out a bit .

 

Rhek, not really feeling that one. I think the bottom of the R and K need some work, seems too fat to me.

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There is a bright orange outline around the whole thing but it didnt show up on the scan, any crits?


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your stuff consistently looks better chad, only thing i would change on that is the lower part of the h bud. for some reason that seems out of place to me

 

Chad-I would throw a splash or 3d to clean up some empty space, its too white behind that H.

 

aint noone said shit so im gonna,
work on purportions, stick simple and your on tha right track.

my advice is keep doin what your doin just mind that purportions yo.

i dont usually do this shit but its 4am in the mornin' and i cant sleep.
if you wanna know anymore pm me er some shit some time.

this, k. straight up get a big jacket and a belt doggie. dont pay that shit its stupid expensive for one, and the majority of the cameras are fake/not being watched, IF they are, they cant legally chase you past their property. ive been chased, dont stop run. WORST case senario you get caught its theft under your gonna be fine. to sum it up, RACK IT. save your self alot of money, resecesion is a bitch.

get creative, racking is easy. dont walk in all G'd out. you'll attract attention, sounds stupid but its true. dont rock tha hat and pull yo' fuckin pants up. haha jus some advice yo.