I would leave the bottom of the first t without an extension and where is the 3d on the right side of the last t?
prea the first T isnt that bad, just doesnt match the second one so its out of place... the A looks weird with the extension on the bottom, and the last T has some 3d covering the S, fix that and itll be a clean simp bek exchange (APES) crits wanted...
Bottom page bump and Prea i guess you liked my T i used in our battle? View attachment 581628 Lol no beef though
huh i didnt even notice, i just draw what comes to my mind, guess that came to my mind.. but totally did muff up the 3d on the right T
HAHA! no I meant it bled out into the weave of the paper not actually through, I use a piece of foam board underneath. Do you just use a standard sketch paper?
Kew1, they look pretty good but i would lose some of the extensions on that E. [Broken External Image]:http://a.imageshack.us/img834/7844/scan00013.jpg Fucked up the C, its a bit too skinny, and I played around with the A. Any Crits? Uploaded with ImageShack.us
kew your shit looks so much better than when you first posted here. chad i dont like the top of the a but other than that everything else is lookin sharp i got bored so i made this View attachment 581688 most of the drop shadow is probably fucked up and i chicken scratch-freestyled it haha
Now thats what i mean!! looks fresh beside what you already pointed out. i might bend the left bar of h a little more torwards the right. the seem to spread a lil. thats just me. oh you might want to lift up the c a bit or lower the d. real good anyways. solid simple all the way.
hah i fuckin KNOW! i had this sketch sitting around uncolored for almost a month, it needed a lot of work but i just said fuck it and colored it.... i try to go simpler but i just wanna give the shit too much style all at once and my skill cant handle that shit... any specifics on what looks good and what i shouldnt do? so im bumpin for some detailed crits, i know some things like the A and P should be completely scrapped lol, but i kinda liked part of the E and part of the S...
it does read apes!!!! i was like how does it read bek, no fuckin way..alright good for you. id say get away from those excessively connected letters. go simpler, uniform , dont squash your letters that much give em room. i extremely hate those thin parts.
Didnt even think it was letters to start with until lord_plankton said it was "apes". Seriously insane stuff besides from I couldnt read it!
You should definitely do that (go simpler). That APES just looks like a few bars with mad swiggley bars. They don't even look like letters. The only letter that's even remotely readable is the S. Look dude, your color, your shine effects are spot on, but them' letters yo'.... I told you the same shit like 2months ago, and it's only gotten worse since then.
i think you gotta look at this style like you would with a kid with autism i know because im kind of the same way the thing that seems to lack the most in my opinion are some of your bars the e seems to get a little too squished and skinny and same with the s you dont have to crunch your letters to get rid of negative space thats what extensions are for if you gave it some better structure but kept your style i think you'll end up light years past other people you've found you own style now you just have to be comfortable with it you know