yea woony, what he said... and the throw on the last pic looks good, the rest of it is just tryin too hard... if its nel46, ur 6's look too much like 5's, it kinda looks like "NELy5" to me... round out the top of the 6, make the "46" the same size and the "NEL" the same size and itll look better, the second pic is about the maximum of extensions u should be usin right now, itll look cleaner if u do those things, peace lean2 lose ALL those extensions... try to bring the letters a little closer.... blocky sharp extensions dont really work on bubbly flowing letters, and halos are really meant just for tags no simps and shit first nemor 'piece', just fuckin with it, not happy with anything about that one... second is a bek exchange i never finished til now... crits appreciated
Extinct: The letter structure is good, but the arrows are a like dodgy for me. The whole piece has radius corners but the arrows are sharp. They don't look like they belong.
chuke - those look dope woony - 3d picture is decent ,would have taken off the drips extinct - bring them letters closer together and take off arrows and dont bend them so much nemor - no offence man but your always doing that style and it just doesnt look good,you should go more simple hom - the throw on the left in the last picture is dope just fix the o because it can be confused for another letter..and i really like the white and red simple in the 2nd picture
fc- yea i have my own style im tryin to work it out to where its acceptable.... but ur the wrong ***** to be tellin me to go simple! lmao homs- most of those O's look like A's to me, avoid the triangle O! u got some style though i like the throwups
homsie - those rip. love the yellow/red scheme, really pops.. kinda throwback to communist-era propaganda/chinese oriental stuff. mad stylez all over haha. i got bored in math today, then took it home... into this
sech i think u should look at some of dukes work... it looks like u have a really close style, just behind his skill, if u dont know, hes a mod here........... i like that single S, but the piece on top isnt up to par, the fill and the structure need work, i like the blue outline a lot, just keep the spacing from the black outline even throughout, that way itll look like theres a clean white line in between, na'm'sayin?
say KORIE ill give crits a lil later i have to go to school haha but crits on mine? its at kind of an angle wont fit on scanner
[Broken External Image]:http://i387.photobucket.com/albums/oo319/fuckthefame/PHTO1087.jpg random one im working out stigma - nice 3d. digging those highlights too man eshn - nice style. needs a little flow imo sech - legit zookyook - that bek is crazy. i really like the string that you threw around it. nice proportions and coloring too. still wanting a tag exchange man
always nice to see someone called out on a bite especially when you work hard as fuck to develop your own style nice one woony bomber kew...you suck
i hate biters i know im not that good but i dont bite noones shit i can honestly say that my shit is original
who the fuck cares.... this is the toy forum, I say bite all the fuck you want, just don't be claiming it's yours... no one cares...