I gotta get a camera

 

here boom and nose..

 

wow dude you really do have a problem with straights.
the top r is prolly the best attempt at an R i have seen you make yet. aside from the right hand side of it being a bit too thin.
e erase the extra lines
W same but also make it up and down. not slanted
L bottom is thicker than the top.
now i know you can do better than that but your being lazy

throw that bottom one in the trash till you can get basic structure down bud

 

i didnt take my time at all on neither, i just threw them up.. im just tired of simps. iv done graffiti for 2 months and all ive done is simps..

 

What do you mean, and how can I add it? please

 

Do simples, as the example above, the top one is simple just copy your keyboard till all your letters are same

 

structure= every letter in the English alphabet has a common set of building blocks that make it up.
start with block letters , copy keyboard letters till you can do them in your sleep and hit them dead on every time.
when i say keyboard i mean exactly LIKE THIS
then and only then start bending, tweaking, adding 3d, and developing style.
EXI can you lay a straight in your sleep yet?
the fact your whining your tired of them and havent perfected them yet really gives me some doubt as to your willingness to learn.
its a shame cause everyone can improve with the right amount of drive and effort.

 

shit looks nice rewt.. and hows this

 

i do have drive and effort, it's just upsets me that i have to start off from square one when i come back from fall break.. before that week everyone said i was doing good and start bending etc.

 

Top R bottom EWL dont look bad, keep on those lines. You have 2 different paths you can take, either follow the advice of people that will give you false hope and make you think your top notch, or do the work and actually become top notch so no matter how or where you want to throw down you know it will be solid. Its not about egos, check em at the door, its about quality no matter how long it takes to get there

 

ill post a new one in a little bit boom

 

Some more

 

Exi...you see the difference it makes when someone is comfortable with the letters and can lay down a simple time and time again without having the beginner errors, i am bettin if rewt did 4 of them and put them side by side ya would prolly think he traced them but its the point you want to bring yourself to

 

yeah i see and how do you do your r rewt its only letter i have problems with

 

thanks man ill post some pictures pretty soon since im in class

 

It's all the same man (no offence). You can work on bars as much as you like, but unless you start changing the bars slightly you're going to be drawing the same outline over and over. Try some of the stuff I suggested on the last page, there's no harm in trying...

 

crits plzz!!!

 

Is that supposed to say dread? what is it supposed to say... i like the 3d and the highlights on it....lose the extentions...i like the color scheme..paint it and see how it comes out..