Meng you gotta cop some markers, but you're rockin the colored pencils with steez. Looks good, I thin the extension off the top of the Z looks goofy though. But keep that shit up
@ Dize : That D is hugeeee compared to the rest...and the E is reall small.....i like the fill and the Z though
bump merge you got some bar problems and unnecessary extensions you might want to try simples more unique is fire gimme crits please Duramax- Work on that hand broski, and there is no flow there. Try some keyboard simps and bars. Female- Do more simple like stuff, but don't overlap it too much, it looks all jumbled up and the 3d's not overlapping correctly. Good effort though, much better then the other stuff. Sore-I know it's been said, but your A's look like R's in the throws. The bars in the piece and that extension coming off of the bottom of the A are iffy
@Ian- Dollargeneral or fuckin HappyHarrys..Its what a bunch of people around my hood use. @Ghostwriter-Thanks yo im tryin to get up in the world...Ya know?
@IbuprofenTablets- I warnded you guys that im toy...Damn dont have to shuv it in my face..whats wrong with people these days?Why cant we get along and do what we're supposed to do?(Graffiti!!)
^part of graffiti is getting told your shit sucks dick when your shit sucks dick, witch should motivate you to quit or get better
seen them hello stickers on the page so i dug mine out and did some in the moment tag. S came out shitty. View attachment 593174
failed on a stick i tried to make, but decided to flick it anyways. i didnt want the K to look like that. it looks different in my head lol View attachment 593176
Conor, all internet graff sites i have seen have this kind of hazing in them. seems in the internet age people rarely give constructive criticism, where at one time you would have had someone tell you "hey man thats not too bad but try this next time to make it better" its been replaced with "your toy, its shit, go home" i have 3 different schools of thought on it and i know i will get the same people flaming me for the opinion but oh well. first problem is the people slagging off others have no respect for anything themselves, whether its an age thing i dunno, most of the time people who have had nothing at one point in their lives know the value of being humble and having basic respect for other people. second problem, where before the net was here people would compare/trade bb's , see local shit on walls it was always a local thing when it came to graff where you would show your shit to people you know and get opinions on pieces. since those opinions would have basically been in person and with people you actually knew , you would get truthful ideas and feedback on pieces to keep you improving.if someone dissed your shit you sorted it properly. now with the internet , there is no accountability , the internet breeds ignorance, the loud mouths figure they can say whatever they want and no one is gonna find them to do anything about it so they view it is sport. for all we know half the people who live on here giving crap feedback with nothing constructive might be all part of some 12 year old girls ballet class in Connecticut, no way to know, no way to prove anything. thirdly , you get the trolls, people who sit with nothing better to do than see who they can piss off each day. no rhyme or reason to it but every forum has them. in real life you would never hear a word from 99% of them as they would end up catching a beating, but on here once again ...its easy to hide behind a pc screen when the people you are starting shit with are on the other side of the state/country/world /rant just keep doing your thing, personally i think you need to work on structure a bit more and got simpler, sort out bar width and go from there
@boomslang- word. if i had to take a guess id say its an age thing. i told people i was 19 and everyone just said wow youre 19 and you suck that bad, so it makes me think theyre younger. people like you are the ones who help others improve
[Broken External Image]:http://img687.imageshack.us/img687/5797/imag02422.jpg tryin some new handies, im liking the name lucid a lot, although its a bit hard to write so far for me